 Alrighty, so pair your email you want to take a look at your reel first, so I'm gonna watch this here Alrighty, let me take a look at your reel Bring down the sound the bits cool Not sure if you need this one You know for For this whoa for this type of animation of this thing flying in I don't know This is cool. It's cool stuff there. That's definitely cool Even that's neat, but this I would take out. It's kind of long. I wonder if you could trim Like once you get to here and cut it out This whole flying thing, but it could be it could keep it Not sure if you need this because you've shown all the physical stuff with the paper so For that to kind of fly in and do this. I'm not sure like you've shown other things that are More impressive than that same thing with this your beginning shots are more impressive than this just seems like you have It's kind of a retreat there I Don't know I would take this one out too. Yeah keep those two. They're pretty cool But if you want to cut down on time, I'm not sure if you need them, but it's cool to see here. I Will keep them for now Here the question is did you do? the VFX here as well Because otherwise, you know static poses There's not much to see animation wise unless you did this as well so I would I would probably note that somewhere here, you know animation and Effects or something Same thing with this It's pretty static. I mean you have a camera move you have a pose Going into one other pose. I'm not sure if you need that shot I mean, I guess it shows variety, but like in terms of animation skills. It's not huge But if you have done all of this, that's super cool. So you just have to clarify Same thing here. I'm not sure. Yeah, it could work. It's just a minimal style of it You know like that. It's basically just a pose Switching into another pose. I'm not sure. It's only compared to what you've shown before Like your other work was more complex So I don't know if you need this looks cool, but I don't know if you need it Same thing with this. It's basically You know a foot coming in and Then this it doesn't show much again, like I would take this one out. I Know it's for context on this but like that is more interesting to see kind of a weight lift Even though again your other work was more impressive. I would take the previous one out and keep that one Even though that one you could take out too. That one is more interesting to me than This one, but hey, you can keep that one. It's a bit shaky I got a very similar one for Transformers that I'm also debating if I need to put that in there But it's basically that just minus the shake You just don't see much. There's not much to see. It's very blurry. Very shaky I'm not sure again if that one is Needed That's cool. Yeah Okay, that's for that Now on the list you have super power drum monkey and elephants separate shots So we know this one. I really like this one. So yes, I would definitely keep this one or have this one on your reel Let's see what this is Not sure. I think If you start around here like that beginning into this could be Maybe till here ish Could be an interesting mechanic shot, but then after this it's basically a repeat Like that's a whole second half to me. I would cut I'm not sure I'm not sure if you need this one, but I would probably go till like front 73. I will keep the first half But yeah, you don't need to rest because it's just a repeat Let's take a look at this guy. It's cool rig. Cool. Yeah, there's a lot of good stuff in there Yeah, I think the thing that catches my eye. We're asking if there's anything this seems there's so much speed and momentum For that to just kind of fold in into that I think to me it would be like One more hop like the momentum can't just die so quickly So even if it's this and if you don't do a hop But the root would be here and and you know the arm could be back here and then one more arm adjustments So that there's some forward move. I think that and Then the swing down here This one feels just a bit odd just because it's it looks like this whole area including this here No, well, there are a couple things so a it's a bit of an IK arm You can see how the whole body is moving But this hand kind of stays in space and the rotation of the wrist is not changing especially through here So that feels very much like an IK arm Then body wise this whole section. There's no break up. It feels like a 2d cards That just kind of floats back. So for me. These are the two big sections I would address does animation wise but as a shot. It's cool. I would definitely keep that one Then we're moving on to This cool. Yeah, that's cool. I will keep that in there My main impression is that this seems pretty heavy. It's a big Elephant and there's something about through here That pop up that feels just a bit lighter. There's a little bit of weight missing that's At this play here if you just feels bigger and here's only feels almost like a kid Kid elephant running forward, but it's a cool shot and that's cool to see too. Oh keep that one and And then here last one you are talking about Tail No, tell you just general idea. Yeah, I remember that one. Yeah, I think as a general idea is cool. I like that Might have a little bit of camera adjustments or you You're out globally bring the camera back a bit so that it's not so cut off here Not that it's super bad, but there's something about There's so much room here. We can we could bring the camera like this much Lower, I think you'd be okay and it gives you a bit more room here, but I like this I like you got little mechanics here, and you got some behavior stuff. You got nice bigger mechanics It's always fun to see how they jump That's fun to see the struggle and then the result. I think that's cool. I would continue with that job for sure Well overall like you were asking if the timing and ideas. I think yes, I would just watch out. He seems slightly Seems something seems slightly broken, especially this this leg through here And it feels like he wants to go this way but comes straight towards us There's something in that curvature that walk that feels a bit broken. It's cute. I think it something feels slow It depends how if you want to go for a wheel on this or a bit cartoonier But there's something where I feel like you want to make that a bit snappier And then you can hold that a bit for a nice hang time and then make that drop especially through here This is a bit of a weird slowdown Feels like it speeds up and then here it's suddenly slowing down again And then here it's speeding up again. So just watch out the timing there That's all cool. I buy all this and again, it would depend on the reference The only thing I'm reacting to is how low the paws are. It's basically pushing itself out here Maybe pushing the leg straight, but because they're bent and coming up here at the same time if there's a hole how Is the creature able to get up there? I'm curious to see more reference for this I don't know if there would be a paw out here Pushing down and freedom for balance so that this leg would be here or there's something that just seems physically kind of strange through there Unless it's just this foot being super strong again, we'll have to look at the reference Maybe that's what they do just something feels odd But then again, I have to say I'm not an expert on this type of action here on this creature. So I Could be talking out of my behind on this But as a whole yeah, I like it. It's cool. Definitely keep that And that's all I have here from your scenes that you sent me. Yep. That's it So for the rest, I will email you my thoughts. All right. Thank you All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you