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Uploaded on Sep 1, 2010

Eme
2010-08-31 . chapter 29
Since nobody comment on your story:

At some point, please rewrite this story. Find a beta if English is not your first language. Fix the formatting and use punctuations at the end of "every" sentence. Including inside quotation marks.

The story on whole is okay but there are too many OOC moments to make this a believable but with those fixes it can be at least readable.

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