 I'm with my buddy Chad Lutzky, who still hasn't emailed me the list of things he would like in the description of these videos so people can go buy his books or check out his podcast or whatever, check him out on social media. Say hi Chad! Chad Lutzky.com It's all there. Alright, there we go. I will add that to the, I'll add that to all of the descriptions. There's this thing called Google E if you want to find out, you know. And the spell is name right. It's like Lutz has the chips and K-E at the end. Kills E, just don't remember that. Lutz kills E, the potato chips are killing E. Lutz, I'm in a mood today dude. I'm in a mood anyway. Is there really a potato chip called Lutz? Yeah, yeah. Lutz potato chips. Or Lutz, I think George and Kathy who owned 112 Ocean Avenue. No, it's us. Dude, I am 100% wrong. It is U-T-Z. So don't remember that. No, that's not a good way to remember it. It's us. U-T-Z. I don't know where the L came from, man. I have no idea. I don't know if some of their packaging looks like an L in front of it or not. Anyways, top of the morning to you. Derek, how you doing? Hello, Jake. Hey, Buggle. All right, so what we're doing today is some, I don't know how much I'll be writing. I don't know how much Chad will be writing, but we're doing, we're sharing his screen and we are doing live revisions. So he's going to go back and probably read the section. Have you read what I wrote yesterday yet? No sir. Okay, so he'll be going through. I figured I'd do it as I went. Yeah. And I am basically going to, unless something pops into my head that I want to jump into, like I did the time before last, I'm going to let him go and I might just commentate what he's doing. Hey Brad, how you doing? We are 3,179 words in. Nice. That is good. I think 4,000, between 3 and 4,000 word chapters would probably suit this very, very well. About 10 pages. Good morning, Haley. I'm munching scrambled eggs and bacon with toast as I listen. Awesome. Do you ever partake of the English, the traditional English breakfast, Haley, with the beans and the grilled tomatoes and all that lovely stuff? Do you ever partake? I don't know how prevalent it is there. Is it like an old person thing, or is it something you all still do? Tonight at 8 Eastern, I will be hanging out with Broad Practor and Jay over at Paper Cuts with Hamelin Bird. Anybody is online and has nothing to do. Check him out. Yeah, Hamelin Bird is a great author. I've not read. I think you'd like him, man. He's one of the people who asked for a blurb a year or two ago and I could tell right away why he asked me. You know, I get requests a lot and it's like, you know, I don't like Supernatural, you know, I'm reading this thing and I'm like, you know, but this guy, I was like, okay, he knows I'm going to blur this. This is right on my alley. Awesome. You know, like grilled tomatoes or mushrooms or black pudding, my youngest would agree with you about all that. So in fact, we were watching a competitive eater, like the UK's biggest traditional breakfast over there. It's like five pounds of food and Chris was sat there watching it and he goes, why would they ruin breakfast with tomatoes and mushrooms? The sausage looked good, though, and I'm like, that's not sausage, my friend. That is black pudding. Ifa is trying to steal my bacon. Isn't that baby some bacon? All right. My one of Chad's, not Chad. Chad, if Chad sounds different, it's because he's having mic issues. So he's using his Apple mic now instead of his Wichomikulugi. It's a Yeti. It's a Yeti, isn't it? Looks just like mine, but mine's red. Yes, it is a Yeti. Yeah. The best pod. Or wait, I guess so, a blue Yeti, yeah. Yeah, a blue Yeti, yes. I just call mine a Yeti, but it's a blue Yeti. I always forget they're called blue Yetis. Like the brand, I believe, is blue. And then the bacon model is, yeah. What the? Vago, miss? Sorry, go ahead, Chad. I was just saying I'm highlighting all the stuff that I... Yeah, I've read it all. You're fine. I didn't have any changes. Miss Groin DVD Reddit. And Miss Groin DVD Reddit to you too, Vago. Love you. I can't even begin to, like, puzzle that one out. Miss... Usually the M means it's a, is... The M usually means someone meant to hit space. I'm trying to puzzle out what the fuck Vago just said. So is going maybe? I don't know, it's whatever. Vago, you broke me. You broke me, hun. You broke me. Dumpster pizza. I'm here in my section. Okay. I see you. Yeah, I thought so. I'm not sure I understand this one sentence here. We're collecting empty peanut butter jars like they're fabric eggs. Oh, Fabergé eggs? Fabergé? I don't know if the joke lands, but that was the intention. Fabergé eggs, and you're calling them fabric eggs. Okay. I guess we can put in something to clarify or we can get rid of it completely. For a minute, I thought you meant those old... In the 70s, they had this brand of pantyhose called legs that were popular. Oh yeah, my two cheese. Yeah, I remember those. Yeah. My sisters loved that brand for whatever reason. So we had those little fucking eggs all around the house. Heck yeah, man. I used to take them to the beach and build little sand castles with them. That's smart. I wish I would have thought about that. We can put something in there. That's the joke. If you think it's funny, we can put something in there with an inner thought from Shane about how he thinks she means Fabergé eggs, but the only reason he knows that is because of a documentary that he watched or something like that. One of his teachers talked about it. I don't know, but I'm not... My confusion, I guess, is they don't want pizza because they've had too much, but this says that they're having too much peanut butter too. They have all of these... I mean, I get it. They'd be tired of both. That's how I was looking at it. They're tired of peanut butter. They're tired of, but they're out of the peanut butter. They don't want pizza. I don't know, but whatever you think for a fix is fine with me. Once again, I'm not in love with anything. But yes, I can see how that could be confusing. I had such a struggle yesterday typing sync. I'm even finding stuff today. I meant sync. It says, by the sick. It's supposed to be sync. I had a puzzle over that one for a minute before I realized what the fuck I meant. I couldn't write it. I wrote wink. I wrote inks. I wrote sick. I don't know why that word was giving me so many problems yesterday. Facial vocabulary. That's a new one. That is a new one. I don't know if it works or not, but I like it. I mean, it's automatically, you know exactly what you're talking about. Yeah, I think my plan is going to work. I made a new document, the dimensions of the A1 poster and 800 PPI. I'm going to try to fix the blurriness now. Hell yeah. I've been drinking. I'm almost done with my coffee. Of course, I need some water. Sorry I was driving. I didn't have reading glasses on, but I was just trying to say mushrooms are best. Wow. Miss growing DVD Reddit means mushrooms are best. Hey dude, how do you feel about the next chapter being called Coke and a Smile? Coke and a Smile? Yeah. That's pretty good. Yeah, open up with Uncle Travis. You know, being happy. That's what he normally isn't. Like you said, his facial vocabulary. The show was great. The more I think about it, the more I like it. This is going really well. Coke and a Smile, I love that. Thanks, Mikey. I have good ideas sometimes. Anyways, I'm going to go ahead and dig my break. When I get back, I think I got something I want to write for opening chapter two. Going mute. Hey, Mayor. Sorry. S.T. The stuff sprayed out right over the waistband. I'm just showing. You nasty fucker. Oh, Lord, what happened? What's that? What? I don't know. Sorry. I was in the middle of writing and it jumped down like three pages and had me in the middle of the notes, making sure I didn't fuck anything up. That was weird as hell. Holy cow. In my paintings I did? Yeah, I replied to. The two you shared with me? I don't know. You sent me two pictures. I've written almost another three pages. Geez, dude. I wasn't even paying attention, brother. It just fucking happened. Hey, Bamp, how you doing? Sorry if I missed you. I'm trying to watch more of Eve and I'm working seven days a week. Man, that's rough. Come on. It's not bothering me if you're worried about that. It drives me nuts. I got you. I love dogs, but I don't like barking dogs, especially when it's just probably just either someone walking by or a squirrel. I was like, come on, guys. You're not used to this yet? Yeah, Hailey does awesome artwork. Nearly four pages. You got more to do on this, but I'm kind of interested in what you're doing. So I want to come up here and see. I'd stop highlighting because lots of little adding things, changing things, stuff like that. And unless it's a full paragraph, it's nothing but new stuff I haven't. Dude, like I told you yesterday or the day before, I'm not even going to remember what I wrote. So it doesn't matter what you change. I'm perfectly all right with you just going with it. I'm going to put a big gap between where I am and where I have not been. That's what I usually do anyway when I'm doing this kind of thing. Stikmax? Stimac? Stimac? Is that what it is? Okay. You took out, you had Lewis, but it didn't flow right? That's fine. Yeah, it was kind of like a placeholder anyways. I just didn't want to call it PandaFuckers grocery and liquor. Like I said, I'm not married is the word that I've been trying to say this whole stream. I'm not married to anything. Well, hopefully you'll like what we've got here. This is a chunky first chat. This is going to be really easy to do. We're going to hit 65 pretty fucking easily, I think, doing it, especially doing it this way. And we're going to have a pretty clean final, a pretty clean rough draft too. The way we're both going back over each other and look more like Kurt Cameron for a kid. I'm trying to think of some 80 popular 80s things that I don't know, a kid might be into. If you could think of some better. No dude, Kurt Cameron is perfect. I see exactly what you're talking about. Michael J. Fox versus Kurt Cameron, 100%. I see that very clearly. There are going to be people. There's definitely going to be people who are like, I don't even know who the fuck this is, but that's all right. They can go Google it. Most people know Kurt Cameron for his religious stuff nowadays and even know that he was a child star. Yeah, you've removed a lot of like little things. I have noticed you're making it punchier and I like that. Oh yeah, ramen. You're going to have to change a bunch of those chip things. I forgot about him getting ramen. That's fine. Yeah, I already did. Oh, and you changed it to a woman cashier? Well, that's only because I had started establishing this character and hadn't read far enough to see that you had made this big tall guy. I don't know if you noticed up above, but I had him instead of going to the first store because they're banned from it. Ah, okay. Yeah. Yeah, you may have missed that. I talked about why they go to the second store and I described the two owners who do it and how. So there might be some references you don't get when it comes to the description of the glasses that they wear. Gotcha. Okay. I call them thumb fix because I say that... Not every day. Sorry, Chad. Not every day, Pam. I'll just go by. Once we get the first chapter to where we want it, I'll go back and read the whole thing. I'll probably do a pass off stream also because I mean, either going to need a break or we need to go pretty soon. I really only need a break. God, awful scars. Ninja my ass. Alright. What do you want to do? You want me to take a break or do you want to finish up soon? I think I'm going to... I think I'll call it so I can eat lunch and we were talking about maybe... Okay. We were talking about since people are hanging out, writing themselves, if anyone is interested in every single word done live, trying to catch up, because you write so much faster than I do, trying to catch up, off stream or I can just... I can do this... live stream on my own too and just not make it a big deal, just have it going. Yeah, I'm fine with either. If you want to do it off-screen or if you want to do your own live stream, perfectly fine. But that would just be for, like I said, to catch up to you. I mean, I'm only at, crap hitting the fan at the convenience store. I have no idea where you're at because I haven't looked at it yet. Yeah, I've done the reveal of the cocaine and everything. Yeah, I'm deep into... Like I said, chapter two is now already four pages long, roughly. And who knows how much of that you're going to layer and change. Also, let me answer VAMP real quick. VAMP, if you're still here, yes, I'm going to be making T-shirts. I'm hoping to have them done before Halloween because she made so many images for me last Halloween. I'm hoping to get those up and ready in September at some point in time. Anyways, go ahead, Chad. And this will give me a chance to catch up to where I can write some stuff too, you know, some other chapters too. But yeah, I'm just such a... I mean, this works out good. I like the way this works out too because I'm such a clean first draft kind of guy. I mean, not like... I mean, I still do more draft. I know what you mean. And me, I don't go back. This is the most rewriting I've done on a work in progress in probably a fucking decade. I've never done this much work. But then again, I mean, it's almost like... I mean, layering with you is just all about, you know, just like building the scene more. I don't know, just adding to what you already have is so much fucking easier than having to do it all on my own and just going back and fixing it. It's not killing my momentum at all. Also, I'm excited as fuck to get to the carnival. So that's another thing that's like pushing me, pushing me, pushing me. I want that urgency to carry over to the reader that they won't even know where we're going with this maybe because of the cover has something carnival theme. But anyways, I want that urgency to carry over and so far, it's moving beautifully. I love it. Well, I did the math and we have written over 2,000 words today. So... Awesome. That's cool. In two hours, that's not bad. No, not bad at all. And like you were saying, if we were doing this without the stream, it'd be going even faster. But the process is definitely helping people out. I keep getting comments about how much of an inspiration it is and how motivational it is and all that stuff. So I'm glad people are getting what they need from it. Especially those who are getting their own work done while we're working. Yeah, that's awesome. I love this community. Anyways, alright, thanks everybody for joining us. There were quite a few of you in here. I think we were up to like 8 or 9 at one point in time. Thanks for joining us. This is good. Chad, anything else you want to say before we go? Vamp asked about my channel. Assuming they mean my YouTube channel, I think it's just Chad Lotsky. I maybe type in YouTube, I think. I think that's what it's called. You're welcome, Viking. I'm glad you got so much done. Let's see here. I am going to we can go tomorrow and I got to cry off for Sunday because it's game night. What I'm expecting is basically the schedule that we had this week where we'll take Wednesdays and Sundays off just to get myself some kind of some time away from this damn computer because I got videos to do too. So I'm tentatively unless something comes up guys expect at least three to four streams a week probably take Wednesday and Sunday off and any other days that we need to but we're going to do this as much as possible because we're both the type to just pound away at a project until it's done. Yeah, we want to get it done. Yeah, exactly. They can take twice as long because you're waiting on the other person to write. This is beautiful. I've never done this before with anybody I've written with where we have just gone back and forth in a Google Docs. Hey Alec, how you doing in a Google Doc and I am I want to work this way all the time. It's nice to be writing something and for the word count to be doubling at the same time that you're writing something because the other person is layering. It just goes by so much faster. I'm doing great Alec. I ain't seeing you in a hot minute. Google Docs they are great. I've written live that way before on Twitter I've sent people over there to watch me write and I haven't used it in so long because for the longest time it had such horrible lag even after I upgraded to my new internet my fiber and I don't have that problem now it is doing some weird shit like sometimes I'll click on something and then I'll start typing and it'll take me down to the end of the page or the end of the document completely that was weird. It happened like at least three times this round and I don't know if it's because both of us working on the same document or if I hit some kind of control something I don't know but anyways alright guys so we're going to head off so tomorrow, 9am as we've been doing if anything comes up, if anything changes for next week we'll let you know but until next time, I'll hail the chair