 All right Back to critiques. Hopefully not to interrupt the pie my cough So let's check this out. Hmm. Hmm. I think my main impression was Slow and limping That's a helpful comment And to me it's this limb here There's something I love it's if it's part of the cycle or you have a slight change there. I Think it's how If you look at this paw it just comes forward and goes bloop. That's great. This one Feels which I mean I like the asymmetry don't get me wrong But there's a slight feeling of raising it more than this one holding a bit and giving this a bit more of a almost human ball You know he'll plant there and because of that difference because that Left one feels like it's reaching more and then planting and then the other one kind of doing Much less of that it feels like almost like a shortest ride it gives it that kind of a Kind of a limp there Now if you could speed that up though, hold on if I go into my playback speed Increase button this is going to be way too fast, but why not? It's almost like I'm seeing a double bounce in the head This is like happiness there, so I'm gonna decrease that but I feel like you want to speed it up a bit Hmm Which also helps the tail the tail is a bit wavy bit strong left and right I probably will go half that distance Let's go back to what you have. Where is there like a normal speed? Yeah, no, there you are So slow that feels in comparison. I don't know. There's something that just feels a bit slow So that was my first impression just kind of slow very slow wavy left and right tail probably reduce the amount there I Overall it has it has a good feel it just felt too slow And if you you know once you speed it up, it's gonna change some of the mechanics attack, but looking at this here I feel like your scapula Should think goes up too high too soon See how it's already going up but we don't have pressure on it just yet. It's like we're already at the highest point there Kind of you have a bit of a reach up here, which is good That's where all the pressure is on you can probably just extend that like just a bit more But there's something off where we go up too soon. Oh keep it low because it's reaching forward It's gonna keep it lower the shoulder blade and then once it's here not on that frame impact That's we don't have pressure just yet on this Around here is that's when it goes up and definitely Around here you want to have a bit more of a straighter leg and higher It's a bit higher shoulder, but kind of where you have it now just a bit higher and here just lower That's my whole point. So you're starting low into high. So we feel that change right now It feels too soon. You can see through here how the shoulder blade goes up Which doesn't feel quite right. Don't forget as you do this to really curl your Toes back and do this at the very end. They have very very lazy those cats are very lazy front legs paws and everything everything is really Rotated back and right at the very end to do a very heavy Very heavy plop. That's why this stood out because it's a deliberate long held You know upwards pose into a plant where it just feels more like a Like a very very fast plop on there I do like your toe spreading there that you have that's cool Saving on the back ones you might almost think they're maybe too far back now I would have to look at reference, but she has a slight feeling of being a bit too spread out Looks nice in the front view. I think there's a good rhythm now in the head left and right Body it feels maybe a bit soft through here the undulating Movement there It's not crazy and again once I think once you speed it up. It's gonna feel better And I do feel like it needs to be just a tad faster But it's definitely way better than what you have before and from a technical point of view what stands out Are these guys here? There's something where they're there's some pops You go back with your foot. It was like it's the end There Could just be on the other one That is my dog in the background walking in Hold on. Is he coming in? What is he doing? No, you can't see it. I'm not gonna turn on the webcam Because he is not coming in my dog Anyway, this must be strange if anybody's listening to this critique Sorry about that. So anyway going back to the back legs there are some moments where if There's a sudden acceleration to me Right at the end where I would take Suns for a picky but about two frames out. There's something that feels suddenly faster. You go up Like it kind of speeds up into this and then at the end here, you can see right through there This would be a slide where if you look at the distance that this travels back Especially this one need to be the same distance going back But then this paw here is not moving if that's a contact on the floor This would already go backwards just like these guys So watch out at this point your feet paws here. They're they're sliding. See this feels right Now look at the other one and speed up and show down with us better All right, so we're going back that feels good. So it seems to be just the left one right there You can see here. No movement. So there's a slide here. Watch out for that Look at the other ones in the cycle. This should be fine. Okay. You're good to go on the back one Yeah, this one seems like it's Really speeding up towards it where it's the end. It's more so the left one than the right one But goes up pretty nicely here, but I would Watch out for instance here as we go back, right? This leg has all the weight on it seems like here's the buckling up where I would bring it more through here It's the leg that pushes this up part of the pelvis of a higher point here and not through here You can see as this leg goes up I see the buckling here. I see it goes up here I would feel it a bit more here reduce this but bring it back more into this This is going to react because of this, but I would bring it more into the pelvis area So we see a bit more up and down through here It's the overall has a nice move and it's it's nice and to me fleshy and there's nothing This joint it just hasn't a slight wavy sneaky feel So it's where it might again be this section that kind of moves a bit too much compared to what it should be doing here picky picky picky stuff there, but And I think the double bounce comes into a strange moment in the head right there Taking a step and it feels like right through there. I'm expecting it to Plop down more for impact then it happens a bit late through there down here and watch out through here Feels a bit like it's just a translate versus a rotation down Which comes just a bit too late There's this one's funky on this step the head goes up instead of an impact unless that's your Kind of a character moment thing that you want to push Since we're going for just a vanilla walk I would personally take that out and just give this I got just an impact tremor on the head It does have okay this here does have a little double bounce just there But again so much better picky things picky things Main thing for me would be watch out the sliding feet. I mean this one sure this works Same thing that a CMG might be a bit too pushed, but the main thing slightly foot there and Shoulder blades acting a bit too soon Detail stuff will bounce enus the role in the toes and the back part of the the butt Not so much. That's so wide in the tail Stuff like that. All right, it's a huge improvement again. It's awesome Keep going and I think we'll might potentially help you visually I'm not sure we know what you turn off when you play blast, but maybe you want something in there Maybe a grid or something Also, maybe for the critique so I can see what's going on, but it I mean this is pretty clear Let me go back here that This is sliding at this point through there But as again, I'm not sure how you animate if you do it just like this on Empty ground and looking at the graph editor or if you do have visual pointers or a grid or anything that helps you Let me know go to email me if you have any questions And talk about this and other than that, that's it from me. Thank you All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way and like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you