 All right, new version. Let's go Yeah, cool. Oh, that's cool. I like all this Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, good stuff. Okay looking at what the No, he's doing going back here. This guy adjusts Snappy goes back It's a bit It's a bit strong and it's it's freeze almost in terms of how this comes to a sudden stop And then what I'm seeing is with all that shoulder and elbow movement Even through here a bit. It's a little bit of softness in the grip But it's mostly this looks like an IK arm set up And I look at that spacing as well It's forward forward here and whoa, so let me go back instead of forward with a slight slight overshoot and Then not having such a straight line forward and This not going down without affecting this like that body goes down Those arms will go down and then I would adjust the grip a bit so that that wrist is not so flat But more like this or like the the knuckle Side here. Sorry same with this. This would be more aligned and then the index will be more like that Yeah, it just it just feels a bit IK is here, but you're saying here You're about to move the polish. So that's just something to pay attention to Or things like the chin has a bit of a tangent with that spear there But just in terms of the feel it just feels suddenly IK ish, but I love how the dinos goes back How dare you and then as we're looking at the dyno? Watch out. So I'm looking at dyno now Then I'm looking a little bit at this guy looks over But then because of that head turn and this happening at the same time, it's a bit of a bummer So what I would propose subjectively is that animal instincts, especially parenting will overrule This guy's focus his focus on not dying. So basically what I would do is And then suddenly snap close Bit up and over meaning like the jaw closes And then you have a bit of a one-two like a bit of a head goes up a bit slight head tilt Two is this Ever so slightly faster feels a bit or bit even in timing But basically this guy reacts first going oh my mom is here My dad is here or whatever and then he has that moment of Way what was going on, but maybe less where is he less to his right here, but more a bit more Relaxing going up a bit and like lifting the head of it like what are you doing? And then oh quick look over there because again, I feel like the parent coming They're so attuned animal instincts will like oh, I know someone's coming and I know it's friendly person And this guy's so focused on not dying that even peripheral vision wouldn't notice. So first reaction second reaction Lafay goes screwed out. I'm out of here don't don't don't don't don't don't don't what I would say And this adds a lot more work. So feel free to ignore, but once he turns it feels more like and cycle cycle cycle cycle cycle cycle Versus let me bring this in a bit more Where he goes whoosh You let me get out of here and he could almost be Hand and also careful in between so that the forearm is out more like this Even this year that wrist has a tension right there like you want to break through that silhouette So we understand the structure of it more But basically he will go down maybe slip a bit And then arm goes down here comes back up into a run and maybe like it'll half jump Whatever whatever you want to do or keep this and then it's a bit of a stumble down fall Come back up whatever again. I'm adding more work, but my point is that it's not turn cycle It's more of a whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa, like some variation in the action and the rhythm Because it's also like oh gotta go maybe I'm looking back like Maybe up right through this moment where we can see the head looking back So run forward halfway side steps is it really is it chasing me or not? I don't know something like that or You go and cartoony or with maybe arms going not forward like old-school cartoon But something and then change into the cycle here because it's covered and it's okay It's a bit more contrast variation up until here right so this section That will be my my comments Stuff like that. I would not quite overlap again. This feels like a tangent right there. I'll keep that clean I'm so picky with this but same thing here either overlap, but not you know just or not either or right And then it's okay, you might argue that's a bit again either go over And really dig into this they're overlapping. It's almost like we are one unit or Bit lower, and you have just a clean silhouette That would be my suggestion there other than that Dinos cool What I like the little guy and then away oiling with the stones because I think I harped on your stones as well Should be fine a big guy parent come out I think you can probably take a frame out of each step at the end. It's a bit sharper I Just curious one frame One ping the silly give me one ping. It's one frame give a bit of a sharpness for some weight It's mostly that one. Let me just cut into this here Watch out. There's some a little bit of a little bit of Spacing hiccup be thing on the head. It's tough. It's tiny sir. So Mostly that though. I know I like it Also, don't mind arms together giving us kind of a triangle silhouette on this. Why not? You might argue well one lower one here for clear silhouette, but I don't know Because you have it with this guy and I like the contrast of arms out and triangle in Maybe Watch out. This feels like all of these characters at the end of the shot All keys set the flat look at the tail Pair and they both go down. It can it almost feels like You're settling too soon. So if you could What if you're caught like here? Just cut out sooner. Yeah, see that it just feels like we're cutting on action Now you're gonna argue. Yeah, but then the settle on this guy's head is not there. Yes, agree I would stay with this ending, but either keep this a keep alive a bit long I mean just feels a bit better even if I caught maybe Here and by the way, you don't know where I'm cutting 214 214 feels better with the tail as well Yeah, I think 214 is your cut out And that's that all righty, thanks Alright, there's an email you can sign up. You can start whenever you want You can submit whatever you want to get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you