 Alrighty, this is a fairly long clip here. Let me just start Bring down the sound a bit So you are having the ground plane right down there alright alright And this is cool generally I would do any type of plans where at the The foot is from a front view. It wouldn't be like this, but it would be slightly off just for a Detail there, I know I'm going detail first, but Generally I would look out for you have your spacing where this goes and into probably give this a different color Where the spacing goes to the right and then bam you can see I just kind of locks through there So make sure that it eases in a bit more and has a bit more of a smoother transition To go right to left And if that's a land If you want to go and compress a bit more, but it should probably okay The main thing to me is that just that pop wow in the body there Then we have those things where those arms of it to twins I think it's a general comment for a lot of the work there where that's cool stuff like that But I think you can push that the bit sooner Same with this I was this is great I would try to avoid any type of twinning there Watch out the spacing on this leg also feels like it's going up up and it reaches the top point And then immediately goes downwards a bit of hang time and Then coming back down. I like that on the land. This arm continues to go down for more compression That's broken because it's fast It's kind of a landing again in the twin pose I know visually we see more of this arm than this but something where I just it just you want to bring in more offsets a bit more asymmetry Watch out. This feels a bit Slow and I K I K as in very straight in its path and you can see this here. So watch your arcs 100 lessons 100 I think on 100 I would have a little bit of a head accent because it's big in a voice There's 100 you want to feel that a little bit that rhythm there You 100 lessons 100 lessons I don't know if you want to have I guess it's because 100 you're pointing over one hundred lessons It's just a bit post-aposit where you hit that extreme with all of these Again a little offset there This is a bit tricky because now we're losing the complete silhouette So I would try to maybe keep it Chicky to have it there. It's I know it won't be a full point But you're gonna have to point either a bit more over there Or just not to a point where we're reading this more if you do a silhouette It's already very busy in terms of you have this right as your character But then you have all those colors and all that detail in the back. It's already tricky Just to really get a clean silhouette. So that imagine the whole thing's gone in the background You still have that as a silhouette for an arm where here we understand a bit more So that gets a bit funky there. You are amazing And I think that again is like a double pose where it's a general thing just having offsets and less post-apose and less Symmetry there are amazing And I mean and I know time. Yeah, but I'm amazing could then she like a You know like a sideways fist, but like amazing that good for you type of thing versus tada type of thing I don't know, but that's a you know, it's a acting choices subjective stuff there. I am so impressed You're really reading now. I have a few more things. I think that all works. It's cute You're really reading now. I have a few more things. I'd like I Have a few more things I don't know if I would do this because with the eye we're going over there But then you want to push here. I wonder to me personally, I will keep this down and not do anything but Bring that arm up so that the focus comes here So then you can bring that arm down into this because again, the silhouette is not super clear here So you can communicate that clear by having that arm up So we all look here and we understand all these armors went down for that. I'd like to show you about the library Let's take a look Then again, I'm not sure if you need that one point. What is this signifying in terms of do I need to look up especially with kids They're going to go like what's up there about the library. Let's take a look I think it could just be library and then come forward and be a bit more relaxed like this And then let's take a look and go back into that. I'm sure if this is needed and clear Let's take a look Okay, that's all for today. It's cute. I like that transition Okay, back to again a bit a bit twins anything I can do to offset these a bit more and then silhouette again gone where if you put this in push seven in Maya I don't worry if that's in my actually, but you will see the silhouette of that arm is basically this I mean, this is a clear structure So you want that forearm to be somewhere either up or down, but that gets a bit funky terms of silhouette That's all for today Okay, that's all for today This could have a little bit of a and you're having a bit here with the roof, but okay Like the okay with that with the roof for today I think that's all for today could have a little bit of something even if you're leaning more over that like a little bit of an Accent on offer today keep up your lessons in reading eggs spelling and story lens That's great. I really like this how you go over that and then get a bit of that rhythm in that arm Leaning over there. I think you can push this to be Bit more like that where you have maybe even a foot roll But you're just leaning a bit more to get in there So it's not so straight there story lands and that way you can come back to that and read some And this feels like you're stuck with the feet like you don't want to rotate or take a step And he's really trying to rotate and reach But I will bring that foot over and take a step back or just loosen that up a bit read some books in the library happy exploring Back to this or we got that W pose with that's kind of twins Try to find something it's either that books in the library happy explore. I Mean exploring Koopie maybe he's like a pantomime me Arm not twin like this, but like what arm goes you like you're pretending to walk exploring like he's walking You're pantomimeing a walk. Maybe happy exploring. Bye for now And that's cute at the end because I mean you have a bit more Freedom since it's for kids to act that's one of the words to make it super clear So that to me is more like it's a general thing versus Exploring like what could you do in terms of pantomimeing the exploring fashion? I know if you want to put like a hand over there to look over there What to me feels like you want to bring in those arms and kind of pretend Maybe even stomp the legs once or twice fellow pretend walk that could be kind of cute I know something like that versus that it's a bit You know besides the twinning and the generic aspect of it. Maybe that could be something a bit cuter for them But that's kind of that. All right, thanks All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you