 All righty we got okay, and that is based on forward here that here She nice that it finishes and then she has a bit of a recovery. I Think my main reaction on this is that it's And then that's it where it's you get to the end and then the end is so much In here Then you have an extra frame there. There's an extra frame Let's cut that. I think it would be nice to exaggerate. Well, there are a couple things It says you like it, but it's too close to the reference and you like to push the poses more Everybody can do is as she goes back Instead of having the thighs Overlap and then silhouette wise we just get kind of that You can have her Lean more the other way and basically lean over that foot more and then bring that foot up Into like a really big It's almost like a picture of the other side though But that could be one thing so it's not just kind of that that little bit of a lift You just go So this would be a much bigger move over and the leg is up and then She can get into this. I like this. I like that She goes into this here and that's cool. I like that a lot here And that big swing It gets a bit from this to this that's a bit strong And I think we can do probably a bigger rotation in the root just a bit and then she goes back It's less in arms But you keep twisting you can push that a bit more and then give a couple more frames for the recovery as you go Forward where she basically untwists and brings that foot back. I think that could help They could also be something where as you go back into this again She goes back is up there and has like the head goes down. There's a bit more of a compression I know she has to concentrate and look at where the ball is coming But it could also be something where that she's getting really ready and she's just Crunching together would be fun to kind of experiment with with a pose like that and then Almost have I know if there's a room So like how it's like this here with that line But it could be interesting too when she goes down to push even further where you Extend that leg potentially a bit more To get a stronger line here and then But the thing is on the twist like this if you want to go back you could almost maybe pull that foot back now I don't play Baseball so it might be all that doesn't work. You need both feet on the ground for that twist and they push off and all that Yeah, maybe but That could be something And I think what's gonna help you too is that by bringing that head down or at least a sideways tilt A bit of a twist there is that right now the head feels a bit locked especially through here This feels like a world space or Ike head just translating down like a 2d card and then it starts to kind of Drive almost too much through there where it's a bit of a quaint This was broken to me in terms of how much is the chest is twist twisted this way and the head twisted this way Whereas this makes more sense. This is more comfortable anatomically more comfortable Dapping set, you know, you want to exaggerate so then potentially push it, but on something like this I would then involve more rotations in all axes to make that work And you just see It's a bit of a wobble in the head And you can see this how you go down and then to the left suddenly But then back to the right and then to the left again So you can smooth it out a little bit and again if you continue with this There's just there's a bit of a release separation with that bends That then stops and I will continue a little bit With the chest, but then it continues it will pull the root with it Otherwise it's gonna start breaking this as this is looking, you know out this way but to me it's like you want to Give a bit more way if those arms continue to go back They're gonna pull this arm back a bit It's gonna influence this a bit more and then especially on the recovery. There's something here Right during this section use box that in but then this feels Totally separate and I think you can loosen up just a bit more. What does she have here? So she goes Yeah, there's just already more of a turn. This is really locked up It's very cool to see though. I do love that That twist and that slight lift And then that That's pretty cool So, yeah For me scope is it would be a couple poses and then you can also It depends how far you want to go if you want to start broader eyes And then this would be a big squint getting ready and then right through there You would open them again and then boom Close and maybe like cheeks out and into this Back into open eyes. Maybe even like a smile open mouth Like that could be Something pretty fun as well So for me, also, there's a little bit of a sudden pop in the in this area right there It's just it's cool. I like the poses. It's just every now and then this feels a bit disjointed So if I just watch this Repeatedly there's a bit of a sudden disjointed move in here and then there's definitely What that that'll pop in the in that In the torso backside where I feel like The legs are better. There's some good stuff in there But at the same time, it's really short, you know, this could be noodled forever. I mean it has a really nice feel in terms of What this is doing I'm gonna sloppily Go over there Like there's nothing crazy Poppy in what the bat is doing But this feels really nice Potentially soften that line a bit and then readjust the fingers Get into something at that sooner, but this is nice. I like that that line And it gets a bit broken there. Maybe just that So it's less hammery like even here you can bring the index out a bit. It's almost like the grip Soffins a bit so that you don't have that broken wrist pose through there Again in real time you barely see it and all it was I'm looking at it specifically but Watching this for the first time. I think the main thing that the two things that stood out to me were this neck I k looking neck here and then that sudden Cool Compression there and stop where it suddenly locks. You can see how this line goes And it locks there Yeah, and that's kind of that So all depends how you want to exaggerate We're away Do you want to just push the poses into strong alliance? Like I said, you want to bring it over a bit bring that leg up to something like that or you want it to be Stylized in terms of you know, if she does this Rotate over this foot And she is rotating away and then rotates back if you want to really exaggerate all the motions Like even this then we're gonna go way bigger where she almost looks up here Like a really exaggerated power and then and then coming back It all depends how far you want to go And that is that I'll leave it at that probably more questions at the end Um, but let me know in the email. Thanks All right, there's an email you can sign up You can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want you get 16 submissions Either way the like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you