 right let's take a look at this here awesome great love it love it that's great love it awesome oh that was a bit faster that that a little quick move there his head that we take that out I'll probably just cut here this might be a bit much of a foot roll on that move here it feels a bit uncomfortable how that knee is in this is down this is up here but I think you can cheat I'm probably not I'm gonna bring out that toe just a tiny bit I know this makes it feel more awkward and everything they're just a bit too much and if you want to keep just cut right here that's all cool oh that's a bit fast A is a bit fast and it also moves in very very straight line you gotta give it a little bit of an arc and then you know slow speed up a little bit here and slow it on right before the plop and then watch out when you do stuff like this here as you continue on you gotta start moving into like sideways movements because right now this is all on one axis it's all very straight I don't know I thought you know one was slightly more successful but this seems almost pushed too far like this one I don't know what this one is because the speed of it of how the hand comes back here almost feels like this is hot if you watch this because like that was hot you know mean versus a slow get off here and then this quick stop it's like I don't know it feels pushed too far and then it's like oh okay gotta hurry gotta hurry everything feels very rushed and quick and fast I do like this I mean like the posing that's okay I like all that but I kind of liked what you had before you know with with the just the comments that I mentioned but this feels a bit pushed too far I'm curious uh and for last part I added the head turns and I darts before he puts his head down but I think a little like he's rushing he is rushing but I think the head yeah even the head yeah I would definitely I wonder if even if splitting the difference between what you have before and what you have now might feel too rushed but you can try that but I'm definitely with you about the rushing this is cool I like all that this is all great my only thing about this stuff here is that you gotta get away from the shuffling so some more uh raising of the foot on the steps especially through here I mean it's like this one I can kind of buy as a as a little bit of a shuffle but then that would be a bit more of a step just a bit more and that could be then a bit more of a shuffle but then when you do something like this watch out it feels like the orientation is pretty much the same you can potentially go out and I know like toe out feels that maybe it's too comfortable but this is just getting too angled parallel defaulty here and I think the timing is okay he was doing slow fast fast slow I think that's cool it's just that bump at the end that's too fast there him looking around is okay ah the head turn is a bit swimmie watch even timing on the head and goes left boom so you could have look over here he starts to go while still being in this pose so you can see a bit more of his eye looking over here and then he can do like a bit of a faster move looking this way and then maybe he does even like a bigger turn down looking somewhere here and then back up to where you are where you have it now just to give it some texture it feels like it's a simple a to b with very even timing on the head no right it's kind of it though it's it's moving along very nicely I think all acting choices are really cool everything's very clear the only thing here feels like it breaks it a bit and like you said it's just a bit rushed yeah thank you all right there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want you get 16 submissions either way like and subscribe would be awesome all right thank you