 All right Let's get to this so left person not animated and cast on pins It's not my It's It's not my fault Cool. I like this a lot. It's not It's not My it's I think what I would do here so she's not always staring like she's staring off to the distance because She's thinking about what happened and now she makes a choice to say something so you could have a slight light art Just for a little bit of a process like okay. Okay. I thought about this right now. Let's do this Just a little one doesn't have to be you know a huge amount, but just at least one Okay. Well now there's a little bit of a change mentally It's not My was you starting to have them here. I would just have it slightly earlier It's not my Actually, I would take that one out That makes sense. So up Darts and a bit bigger than what you have Here because now right that way you have staring. She's thinking. Okay. Okay now. I'm thinking about what happens Boom dart. Okay. I'm gonna say this It's not And then that is good and that's where the breakdown happens again Then she can stare again because she's still thinking about what happened then you do this my It's not my fault. Yeah, this is great. I love it An animation wise I would just say it just feels all very one-axis So as you continue on I would just add more complexities to the body and head mostly head so if you're in this It's no offsets And I know you know all this, but I'm just I'm just mentioning what I'm seeing here Even this going up could have a little bit sideways arc And you know, it just feels like this is the character and you tilted it forward versus if this is the pain that she has It would be she would have a slight arc over here with a compensating head. Now imagine your pain it's kind of like She got hurt here. So there might be some scratches here But I imagined full attack came from this side, which I go I it came from everywhere But you know, just imagine that's the pain here. So just that pain could kind of radiate out That's why to me she would have a slight curve to it It's not and in that way it also plays into you know, it's not just Curvature this way. It's just all slightly bent and then when she straightens up here You can straighten again, which gives her more strength. It's okay. I'm straight enough. I'm gonna say this. It's not My and then I like how you start trooping over But then you can start trooping over sideways as well She goes back and breaks back into what she was before But you can see how this is all one axis going forward My That's cool. Like now you're sorry now you're breaking things up that makes it interesting more organic And I think right through here, I would just push the pain a bit more in her face Like she's trying she's trying. It's just too painful Oh, just along one little bit more. Maybe a little twitch a little You know, what's it called? I am forgetting the word Like not like a spasm. What is it called when you cringe a little bit Just a little bit to push that which makes her go into this There's a good breathing here So as you do this, you know, even through here, you can see how Which kind of rotates on the axis it collapses the chest here. So even through here You know again because of the pain because of disability here It will kind of shift your body a bit more to the side. I Am basing this all on my appendix Operation on this side where I was completely leaning over for some reason That's cool. I love all that right. She's trying again It just feels a bit even that arm coming down and you if you look at the wrist How the wrist bends the other way and then comes back down. It was almost like an overlap drag overlap type of thing And there's something it just was like a move Versus is she now taking the hand off holding the here a little bit for the dramatic pause before the second straighten Maybe into a little fist a bit earlier, you know, so that that arm move just feels animated and doesn't feel performed if that makes sense That's great Again, this feels just one axis down this way Complexities in there and there's not much going on in the chest. It's just you know future passes Head accents in complexities and how it takes a chest with it just a bit more And I know you know this I'm seeing it It's It's not my it's could be cool here That inhale to be stronger Chest shoulder or something in the head where she tried and this just just feels like yeah, whatever I'm trying But no, it's almost like you want them all more something Powerful in their body through that inhale Like I want to try again. It's not my fault and then it's not my fault. This is one of those where it's just jaw slapped on to move so This is her This is the last try. She's really saying it through all of the pain all of the mental and physical pain So there's a lot more you can do with With a chest in the head here. It's not my fault You know like something where it's a little bit of a shoulders up and then kind of a sideways tilt I can lean over it's not my fault and then then on the up a bit of a shoulder down and get into this and also mean like the sideways arc It's not my fault and then you can As she makes eye contact here you can decide boom during that last moment are you gonna bring down those corners is that the You know not angry, but you know stern But it's it's it's a change in her face at the end. She said it is eye contact And what does that mean? I'm making eye contact for what I'm getting You know, it's almost like I'm getting more mad Not my fault damn it or it's not my fault. Please help me, you know Because why is what you make contacting? What's the point? So story wise What is she telling that character? Why does she want to make eye contact? and through all of this here like I'm not sure I'm not sure what the resolve is here story telling wise for her. It's not my fault meaning Fucking I want to fight back or I need help. I need your help Which could be sister mom, whatever it is right or nurse, whatever it is here Yeah Love the setting love the line. I love that. There's so much said without actual lip sync You know the actual line in there. It's really cool Love it all. Thank you All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you