 All right, let's check this out. All right, so you have that and that goes into the older version, let me bring this back So you are mentioning that if we're shot is on a cycle Confirming my suspicions. I think one of the reasons why it stands out is because of repetition in terms of poses and strides It still has a little bit of that that sudden like if you look at The bounces in the roots You got this sudden stretch, which doesn't really happen here. You would have to have a bit of a bigger leap and An extension of the spine like that just to feel like this is something that connects Throughout the shot. It's just a little bump there. That's kind of weird The other thing that just makes it makes it a cyclie if that's a term is that There are those weird Slippy things on the feet. She doesn't really connect too much. Same thing here. She doesn't connect here properly Again, I can kind of buy it here because she is turning and it could be slipping and you could animate like you could You could put little geometry, you know pebbles there or something Throughout I mean she's here to kind of bounce off and you can add some cool stuff there But you know slippage in the feet like that just feels like that's a walk. That's on a path You can also lift up the head a bit and turn in a bit more and why Just so she actually is leading that action bit more with the head. There's a good lean body wise though but it's also changing changing her arms in terms of How do you repeat certain actions and also this might be just a bit much? How far back you go without really pulling the shoulder back and twisting That chest over It was better here. I'm leaving it a bit more there But it's like you have You know that type of shape Where it's this and in a way that right and that gets repeated. That's cool But then you could change it here She could have not that she it would be twin like this But it could be something where you change your finger pose That arm is further out just a bit of a change where the cycle gets interrupted. She is turning Especially through here we're getting kind of back into the same pose So you could start through here where that's cool. It's nice silhouette You can push that somewhere here as well Then she adjusts again through here so that you don't end up with That and that and that doesn't hook up either. So that's you have it almost stretched and it's a bit of a bend So imagine When I watch this I feel like okay She has a lot of those arm poses don't like that basically and then you cut to This and we're back into the same and that's why it feels like a cycle Where you could start like this have some changes and then that change really is shown across the cut Where again, she could have something that's a bit not bent like that Sorry, but and I don't know, you know, you don't want it to be where it's twinned like that But a change where she is breaking up her Her rhythm right through there because she has to adjust because of the curve and then You can get into this this probably when she turns That's a massive head turn With that really affecting this this feels very broken through here It's such a turn that the chest would almost be towards us that arm would stay here. I Wouldn't go all the way back here It would really be an interruption of of how she runs and I probably pull that knee a bit more towards us Give it a bit more of a sideways thing because that's that hip is really still straight I would turn it around and and bring that knee again towards us cheated a little bit Because even even her actions through here those swings Even though this one's higher And the lower it still feels kind of the same where you can break it up with a bit of a different arc That was a sneeze Just something a bit different and probably not go as far as feels weirdly uh overextended You know where the strides are not like the arm strides if that's if that's the term Or maybe not that far maybe she swings only from here to here You mean just big big steps adjust and then it's small small small and then into this That's the other reason the rhythm Yeah, if you look at the rhythm It's always the same. There's no break up. You want to feel bum bum bum and it's Small small small and then maybe the last one could be a big one again. You just want some contrast It feels like it's step step step step step step step versus step step step around the corner Oh something sideways and almost falling type of thing. You know, it's just it's just some break up in the rhythm That's also why it feels like a cycle because it's always kind of the same That makes sense Yeah, it just feels like you do a massive rotation only here Some slight changes, but it doesn't really change It doesn't really affect the rest of the run basically but the camera Camera works. I like that Yeah, camera works You would also need some ponytail Let me show that Yeah, that's kind of it. Thank you All right, there's an email you can sign up. You can start whenever you want You can submit whatever you want you get 16 submissions either way the like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you