 All righty, let's go back here play this in full. I don't know why it makes sounds new ending here Cool All right, so my impression was this still feels like a big pull down It's almost like you want to go here and then almost get a little bit of a whole not a whole but slow down So they can go really shoot up here and then hold this a bit longer watch out if you would space this out If you're very tricky in spline is you're hitting This for me to hear such a wall. So you want to go for an easy into it It's a bit more once you spline this to hold And in that way the timing is a bit more consistent. So it's not so It's a bit more naturalistic in terms of weight and spacing and then suddenly get into this So I think if you have a bit of a slow down Hold for power it would work And then here Same thing here careful that you are When you go up it feels a bit like we shoot up But it's it's a massive move from here to here and a bit less here, but then Here we go Just straightforward. You might have to go once this blind is a bit higher Just kind of like shooting up in a slight jump then into this and I think it would work with then she compresses a bit this still has a bit of a feel of Peridiveness was kind of like, okay run run run run run, but you get on something higher So it might be what are you doing here? She does this and that and if you're doing something parkour Well, she's doing it a one arm. I was gonna suggest a rail in this but Could it be What could you do here Something sweet doesn't feel like just a slightly bigger step onto this and you have separate Parts there thinking she has to go on something. There's only like a Casimir this there's a drop in here and you get those poles taking us just one two three onto this Maybe something interesting here there I say It's that section because then we have the jump. I mean happy brutal I would say after this into that. This is the down. It's the patient for the jump that happens here So she goes from and jump onto that and cut this whole Section out again. My main concern is repetitiveness This is cool concern that I have here is that This is light and She's heavy and for her to jump into this it feels like yeah, she's gonna This is gonna buckle unless these are you know, these are rods She's gonna buckle this and it's gonna go We do this, but I don't buy that this is so heavy that it would actually Drag her up there and if it would because of some speed of force then She would be dragging full body She goes this way Well, sir momentum is this way and this thing is going this way. So on that frame She will be like that and then she will go up into this That's cool. Like that. It's from this angle. I would just take this hole and make it bigger So we don't have the darkness here obscuring the silhouette there So she's kind of clean and then to that that's cool So my main concern about repetitiveness is that she's doing a jump where she flips like this and Then here she just kind of the same thing I know she's straight here and she's more tucked in Plus that's top view and it's not top view But it goes back into it's just a variation of what we've seen here So if it's there anything that we could do here. It's a royal week That would change that ending. That's kind of that's kind of that So question is then I mean my question is then How far if I be brutal with the edit it would be she gets down jumps up You know so up here compress big jump cuts 76 103 the jump goes straight into this like I say every work the camera obviously Into that watch out the mechanics of this not quite buying what I said before on this, but then she does this That's cool. Like I really like this. This is really cool. But the cut helps change it up a little bit And then you could have like So it's written this view. This is don't do this. I'm just I'm thinking out loud This is wider and you got some blue color as she does this here You got you know, whatever animal monster can come out towards camera and almost snap her So like this would almost be like an overall She jumps over this and maybe you'll fire back imagine. It's like some really dangerous Exercise parkour something training grounds to give it also some extra pinache. So even through here Like ashy lands pee pee it may be this like some lights turn on and you got those that floor suddenly gets cut into Cubes and then they start to go to go down as a sheet has to run and jump because the floor is breaking You know something like that and then stuff could happen spikes could come out like give it some danger or something I don't sound silly kind of cool. This is you know, just because you come towards us or you make it silly Never a bunch of tiny little fish Swarming here and jump up into that. That's cool. And then for the ending It could almost be like why are we going to a wide view? Yes, we can see both cool And then you have to kind of tilt up a little bit to reframe, but why are we through there? Maybe something really ridiculously Presentational so imagine we would tilt up and she would go through Like a ring of fire That's ridiculous, but you know, like why not I go bigger go home and it's I'm trying to Turn off my my drawing tool can't you finally know what happens? So anything massively ridiculous she goes through that ring and dolphins jump in unison here to celebrate she goes down and then things pop up here confetti and and You know fireworks, I don't know it is ridiculous, but Maybe that could be also the fun of it like you're having a ridiculous elements Where I think shoot at her creatures try to snap at her and I'm really talking like silly stuff Even even it's like the old robots like something silly and simple to animate but something where just It's not just about this but also the fun of oh, okay She's running away from crazy contraptions and then they get crazier and crazier even this jump could be Again something that she has to go through or evade and it just gets crazier and crazier again a big fish They try to snap at her or the opposite lots of little Piranhas that jump up tried to get it get her like oh my god You're going what else is going to happen. This is getting crazier and crazier and this is her big finale Ba ba ba Into this and you know make a big spectacle fire or something I mean That could also be fun like to me this would be fun just because you would then animate a bunch of stuff That's either little creatures or mechanical things robots. I don't know. This sounds like fun to me, but also crazy ideas So I'm gonna leave it at that Yeah, the main thing just sometimes timing in here or spacing in there once you was flying this and And then the physics and mechanics of this in terms of like practical things that I would address Moving forward even if you don't do any of this and that's kind of that. All right. Thanks All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way the like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you