 All right, let's take a look at this Thank you Cool, I like that timing already Like how long it takes you or her to Stop and then come up by that sense of weight And I like your compression with the legs Depending on how far you want to push this you can always have a little bit of a bend Get into this maybe depends how far you want to go For this I know this is it's kind of a coming in and then just looking up type of thing But what you could do is I do like your your twist in this Watch our intersections As you go through But I don't mind having that leg like outwards like that with a twist like this since it's a fast and Especially like when she lands she kind of looks this way So all this to say that instead of doing a simple one-axis look up they could be Even this could be I mean it's a bit of a Lean this way, but you imagine have a little bit of an arc and You could play with either either side there. There's a tilt So it's not so simple not that you have to do like a crazy arc and overshoot and stuff like that But just maybe just a bit more you can play around with a bit of the attitude of That and I wonder if this is I don't I've never animated this rig But I made it much lately, but out of this has any controls In terms of giving us you know a bit different shape and not covering this arm too much there And this is going to be a pain But see this I like you how you go out of there. It's kind of really work on your artists You're saying the first pass here. This is a Attempt here. What is your writing here? You started just starting on something new. Yeah, it was nicer You know peeling finger poses for the drag obviously all the facial stuff Like where this is headed Yeah, my only concern is just all the stuff. That's there that we might lose some of the you know the silhouette But you're pushing things pretty nicely so we understand The shapes watch out This gets a bit wobbly as this goes forward and then back and then back to the left again and then to the right So watch just watch this space warrant. I know it's fast, but it's a bit strobie Again, I'd like to the drag on the head That's nice. See that kind of stuff For this you could probably play around with the spacing of it So maybe this arm might be slightly further back. So then that's spacing wise This will be a bit further out so that here it's actually in front of the hair So you have a nicer silhouette color silhouette. It's not bad I mean, I get it here, but the hair and the finger is a bit aligned here for tangents And the same thing here will you know, however you're gonna animate this But this is going to be clean so might as well have it clean here. That's all Yeah, yeah, I just depend on what you're gonna do with the hair I would always clean things up and the hair would drag so this would be a nice open Pose there and no tangent there. I know these things are all fast. But for me, it's always like any frame You can keep as clean as you can like even something like this has a tangent. What are you gonna do with the background? Like even all this aligns just a bit too nicely. This is going to be somewhere else But just watch out tangents and stuff like that Q pose at the end Yeah, I mean, it's this is all head in the right direction the the broader comment would be like is there anything else During this section Because not that it's the same pose, but we're coming in hold, right? Just a bookmark for myself here and then Hold again. So you're looking at You know, I know they're not super similar, but they're still similar So maybe this could be a different pose or you're getting to this and then you like up into another pose a bit of a sub pose there and Then into this and then camera wise Maybe hold on this could be potentially faster camera wise I'm just concerned that it's a bit slow slow Just for contrast giving this a bit of a faster move Let's rework these and depending on what you're gonna do with this stay like that 2d effects whatever it is But that could be something a bit faster just for contrast And that's that yeah, I know that's it. It's super cute. I like it keep going All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want You can submit whatever you want you get 16 submissions either way like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you