 Alrighty, let's play this here Like that end That is your sit-down assignments. Definitely a fun way of doing this So my thoughts would be I Think it's okay. I wonder if you can Start maybe here. I Don't know if you need all of these was your one two three. It's nice on threes But it's also kind of long. I don't know if you need it because it's it's a repetitive move and I wonder if you can just do Be landing on this here, right? I imagine it's just maybe you'll land on one Maybe here you could even start you know something here. Well, that's a yep, but even this could be Take one step out and jump sooner I Know it's gets into very subjective land here, but that's it's just my main impression It's a bit repetitive here that goes on for a bit long Just in terms of just Repetitiveness, so yeah, if I be super picky would be maybe starting like I said, maybe here whoop and a tip there Wow But you are right around there. Yeah, super super picky now in terms of mechanics watch out you have a really fast Move here in its current stepped Progression here, which is really tricky because there's nothing really That would push that character this way it might push off with a little bit of forward and up But it's such a on one leg hop. There's not that much strength and momentum to suddenly Have that if you spline this this drop here that section Especially from here to here feels really fast So you're gonna have some more break down and slow this down a bit more and then watch out after that you have a turn Where you're initiating a jump like this? Let's put some on your skin in here, but then your jump is a bit high straight Careful careful with that. I mean you might argue maybe that leg could stop it But then I wouldn't have that leg, you know a bit out more this way I'm just curious how that's gonna feel But you have so sudden acceleration and then even if you keep this someone make this work Then this would stand out even more you would then think you'd be even more forward screen left momentum Because after that once you're in the air here and you land there's still quite the arc But then this Feels you know, I mean you're going up here It's the next key to this. It just feels a bit wonky. It could work. I'm just I'm just a bit Concerned just about that moment, but I think once you flesh it out. I think it's not hard to fix to me. It's just a little arc adjustment This is maybe a bit strong. I like that you have that impact that curves But I think your recovery there with this We'll also feel a bit fast especially how fast she stops for someone that's like this bouncy, right? Then that that that that playful and everything it also I feel like she would and on something else not just here rotate down Then rotate back up same axes, but she would Land and be maybe here Hey, hold on to this, you know one leg up here Maybe you know like this there's a playfulness in terms of the acting and personality here That's kind of really suddenly missing once she sits down Or you know hops down and goes up into that so it's not really a mechanical note But more something in terms of posing and character Let's pretend you do want to keep The three hops. Let's just check here So you're always at the same height So it could also be something where at least you would change it to Boy Or something like that in terms of hop hop bigger hop one leg one leg jump land So you have to kind of look at that rhythm as well So that there's just a bit more contrast and less repetitiveness to it And that's mainly that still in rough form. So I mean that's these are my biggest things The next thing we do whatever you're gonna change you kind of look at silhouette So you don't have those overlapping moments. You might as well have a nice clean Shape there in terms of what the legs are doing. You know like passing poses like these But that's not tangent right there. You'd have even if it's overlapping you would have something like that. I Would just look at moments like these gets a big crowded with those arms. It's not too bad, though And then yeah, mainly mechanics and timing for this section Alright, and that's it. Thanks Alright, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you