The Punishment (Portal 2 fanfic)

PLEASE READ DESCRIPTION

(Did my best on both a Wheatley voice and the GLaDOS voice modulation, I'm sure I could have done better on both.)

Beginning with an alternate-ending to the game, The Punishment begins with GLaDOS saving Wheatley from being sucked out into space, if only to be able to enact a better form of making him suffer for what he did to her.

This scene is from the very very beginning of the fanfic, and so far it's the only time we've seen core Wheatley, since after this he is in his human body throughout the rest. The story is tremendously long - 17 chapters of pages and pages - but that's a good thing. The author so far has managed to make even the quieter moments of the story entertaining and interesting enough to keep me engaged...and inspired enough to make this little reading.

Now, if anyone's interested in reading this story now, just be sure you know that this is a M rated fic, NSFW, and - while really really great - has quite a few of what my mother and I call 'stoplight moments' (an inside joke between us. It almost never fails that when we listen to one of her more adult audio books in her car, if she has the top down and we stop at a red light, the characters will almost always be doing it :P)

But, if you are over 18 and enjoy longfics, I really must give this a recommendation.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6971431/1/The_Punishment

The tumblr with illustrations (also rated M & NSFW)
http://thepunishment.tumblr.com/post/6698423834/authors-note


Background music from the Portal 2 soundtrack.

Category:

Film & Animation

Tags:

• Portal 2
• The Punishment
• conquerorwurm
• fanfic
• reading
• GLaDOS
• wheatley
• chell
• human

[RoninRaccoon]

What can I say? You nailed it.  Great job!

[bookmaniac101]

one word...EPIC

[amberace]

Your voice really gives this fanfic life.

And It was fun to hear.

[shedininja001]

its so dark!!!!

[shedininja001]

well done!

[NightEyeStudio1995]

This. Was. AWESOME. Celia i love your readings. I know you didn't write this but the way you read it out loud is just wow. I got chills and everything.

10 stars from me =3

[Strobertat]

damn. I'm so glad Wheatly is safe in space. At least he has the space core to accompany him.