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Uploaded by matthewpalance on May 30, 2009
A slob decides to impress an environmentalist.A silent film produced for FS 104TV, Video Technology. Created by Stephen Lewis, Laura Flores, and Matthew Palanca
Film & Animation
Standard YouTube License
Hey there! Pretty nice. Just some feedback:
The acting was pretty nice!
Colour grading seemed good too.
There seemed to be line-crosses now and then.
You placed your characters often quite in the middle which isn't wrong, but it would be more picturesque if you placed them more on the sides, eg. rule of thirds.
God bless you!
LWhong 2 years ago
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Hey there! Pretty nice. Just some feedback:
The acting was pretty nice!
Colour grading seemed good too.
There seemed to be line-crosses now and then.
You placed your characters often quite in the middle which isn't wrong, but it would be more picturesque if you placed them more on the sides, eg. rule of thirds.
God bless you!
LWhong 2 years ago