English Video Essay Sample 1

This has a lot of mistakes on it guys, please just inform me about them and help me fix them, if there is anything wrong, or something you don't like, let me know please.

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[afnan1111]

explanation at 1:06, 1:17, 1:59, 2:10 take out the becasue part..., 2:24 just put cathrine in the previous slide,2:40, 2:51, 4:01, 4:15 just put a picture of escape with the word escape in the picture, 5:47, 6:09

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insted of the explaniation in those slides just put pictures thats it

ask zohaib what he thinks about it

[afnan1111]

Need to make the quotes longer!!!

[afnan1111]

I have to fix the topic sentence at 4:17 ! Any ideas?

Have fix pic size length and spelling at 4:38 !

Finally, the final part with Blanche at 5:49, I need to re write that and explain it better! Help me with that please!