sLam Poetry
Uploader Comments (sykesmarcus)
All Comments (19)
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" try's to start slow clap" an doesnt care if any one els claps
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Kind of bland,
there was little hook if any,
I'm sorry for the harsh critique but as a Slam poetry fanatic I lost interest quickly.
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it'd be sooo amazing to see you dressed up, maybe in a mask or makeup- interpreting to the words and music, with other cut scenes of course. easy with a vid cam. and windows movie maker. but other dan that- awesome!
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Your delivery and body language is amazing which matches the words being said in this video thanks!
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yeah, the music was too loud. it would have been nice if it were just there as background, but it seemed as though it's trying to be one of the main focuses.
her tongue ring distracted me, too, but maybe that's 'cause i was staring at her mouth.
i liked the piece. :]
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Brilliant, but the music was more of a distraction than anything else.
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the music is utterly irritating.
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I thought the music was a bit loud... and maybe there was just a little bit too much 'tude... like, I felt that she didn't give the person watching a reason to like her.
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I don't about "porky". Thats a little mean lol. However, I do agree that she could definitely use ALOT of practice.......as well as a writing workshop or two.....
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she is awesome :D
this is the third I've found by you on youtube, and all three were amazing... words crafted with excellence.
Does anyone know where I can find more by her?
chrisinajar 4 years ago
yea i will post them soon
sykesmarcus 4 years ago