Another contest entry. Enjoy.
My mixtape - http://tinyurl.com/meptzt
Lyrics:
You want it wit me? For real?
You just dont know. Hehe
So how should I attack?/
ATF?/
Something like that?/
Everybody wants to rap without an identity/
Well I dent penty anty actors plenty see/
How you want it?/
Right cross or uppercut gauntlet?
Borrowed rhymes cant win/
So dont borrow them/
I sit back & watch all these ciphers ignore me/
Maybe its because theyre all boring/
You could say Im angry prolly pissed much/
Fanbase stuck/
On Wikipedia rhymes/
Clutch a dick much?/
Just cus you read a lot of books dont make you great/
Just cus you spit current events dont mean I can relate/
Then when I called out bitches 1 star the video/
When lyric for lyric my bars are killin those/
I looked in the mirror & asked do you quit much?/
So people with your criticisms do you spit much?/
Say it like this, enunciate more/
Um excuse me who you think you are boy?/
Gun raps mean NOTHING especially from you/
Didnt yo ass once audition for Blues Clues?/
How dare you come at a man with your Juvenile words/
Back dat ass up you took a wrong turn/
Get away/
My side is a horror movie/
& youre claustrophobic so youll have to get in the booth to shoot me/
I flow heat wit no beat/
You cant handle hammers the recoil would break ya wrist/
& hold guns upright thats why you always miss/
This aint a rap beef cus I dont need promotion/
I awoke from boredom/
A single fan of yours instantly becomes a bored one/
Uh oh chest puffed out louder volume/
Fist cocked back, crowd just pardon him/
Come on now, you dont want no problems (problems)/
I pull it out click clack BOOM just revolved him/ (shot him with my lyrics)
I told you I was Ocelot/
This time its an acapella onslaught/
After you did what you should not/
Im the Titanic & he got what he deserved/
Lil boy wanna be cold but hes just a Yung Berg (iceberg)/
Like I said I spit heat no beat/
I dont hide behind beats they hide behind ME!/
~Rock
LOL your a trip homie. You MOS DEF got BARS RHYMES AND LYRICS and punchlines I can't even lie it's hot! I respect your written wordplay. But as for that flow....mmmmm it's decent it almost sounds like a forced angry gruff voice like YOU WANT ME TO BELIEVE THAT YOUR SO TUFF....don't yell to hard to prove that shit. Just be authentic. This is a good entry though. Respect for your dedication to Hip Hop my dude much love. Peace and God Bless
ICanRapBetterThanU 2 years ago
thanks for the comment, not forcing anything tho..
RiGolettoMicFiend 2 years ago
dope stuff, real passion.
mine's up, so check it out.
Thanks bro
-Sketch
SketchTheBboy 2 years ago
Thanks for the love, rate & favorite it & don't forget to check the rest of my music by subscribing to my channel.
RiGolettoMicFiend 2 years ago
sum Real Shit
jayone451 2 years ago
Thanks a lot!
RiGolettoMicFiend 2 years ago