Uploaded by FunkyPurple08 on Oct 6, 2009
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Annie's p.o.v
"What about Kevin's promise?" Mel enquired quietly glancing quickly towards Kevin to make sure he hadn't heard
"What about it?" I asked slightly confused
"Well you broke it?" she asked her cheeks rising in colour as she watched my face drop in complete alarm
"What?" I asked then it finally hit me
"Oh no...Melody were married" I whispered softly and this time it was me who watched her cheeks slowly fall
"Oh..." she responded complete fazed. The light hums of the engine the only sound keeping the car from silence as I felt the tears well in my eyes. Hurt flashing across hers
"When..." she finally spoke after a while her voice so small so vulnerable
"About four months after we were rescued...." I trailed off as she moved her hand from mine wiping the evidence of her fallen tears quickly from her cheeks.
"we wanted you there melody, we tried so many different ways to find you...we even bribed the therapy centre into asking you for an address but it was like you had disappeared..." the soft touch of her hand brushed against mine before she grabbed it tightly
"I'm so sorry" she whimpered her pale cheeks slowly turning a light shade of pink from the effects of her tears. Though it being there wasn't a good thing it suited her. The colour gave her new life something she seemed to be missing
"Mel what happened to us wasnt something you forget easily, we all deal with it in different ways, right and wrong" I soothed as I pulled my arms around her the best I could while being in a moving car and well pregnant
"You weren't the only one who dealt with it badly melody... but its how you move on from that, that matters" I explained if melody could make the first move maybe so could the others
"How do I move on Annie I've been gone for so long I don't even nowhere to begin" she admit bravely
"How about with your dad" I responded carefully I knew this was never going to be an easy subject for her but it was probably the easiest place for her to start. At once she froze, stiffening in my arms a tear escaping trailing down her cheek
"Annie I was all he had left and when he finally got me back I ran away again...I...he must hate me" she admitted her thoughts insecurely. Letting her bangs fall gently across her cheeks hiding the pools her eyes had become
"that last statement is so far from the truth...he loves you so much Mel he just wants you to be happy again, he wants you home where he knows youll be safe we all do" I placed my hand gently on her arm trying to make her see the truth she needed to know that no one blamed her we all knew whos thought it really was even if it was taking some of us a while to see it
"I knew how much he needed me yet I still left I was so selfish" she moved further away from me leaning her head gently across the glass
"I only thought about myself" she whispered. I sighed as I sunk further into the chair maybe it was time she knew what really happened when she left
"we all thought about ourselves the first few weeks, we had to Mel how else would we come to terms with what happened...I tried to ran away just like you Mel but I had someone there to stop me tell me that it was going to be ok" I admitted looking towards Kevin. His eyes still stuck firmly to the road oblivious to conversation commencing behind him
"someone should have been that person for you melody and I'm sorry I wasn't" I sighed looking down at my lap if there was anything I regret in those first few months it was getting lost in my own troubles when other people needed my help so much more
"Annie you had every right to act that way after everything that happened to you..."
"We all went through difficult times..." I cut her off
"Annie you were told you couldnt have children thats more than difficult times" she stated startled.
slowly I moved my hand towards my stomach. My fingertips delicately tracing the scar I knew ran directly along it. She was right it was more than difficult it was soul destroying. To know that I would never be able to have children to know I would never be able to carry Kevin's child was something that did destroy me. I felt empty, broken something Kevin dissevered much better then. That day back in the forest and the ones that led after were days I would never forget...
Ones that would and have scared me for life.
Ok so I was running out of ideas for questions so I stole a MySpace quiz called random so here goes
Q1. What was the last thing you laughed at?
A. probably like two seconds ago at something stupid but the last time I like really laugh was yesterday when I got back to my desk in school to see my friend had drawn loads of different pictures all over it mostly crazed cats lol :P
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great song :)))
kardo9111 9 months ago
we went to lido de jesolo, in jesolo. :P
it's pretty near venice. ;D
it was amazing.
where've you been?
x
DougBob93 2 years ago
Grat chpater and the last laugh that I had was at my sister because we just brought in a guy from North West Territories and he had just moved in...we were watching the hockey game when my sister let one rip right in front of him and said he had to get used to it XP
Mrstwilightsagalover 2 years ago
poor mel...
and i last laughed at a guy at my work.
coeyjbfan93 2 years ago
Woah!!!!!
Normally I would type a long thing, but i have a frosty in one hand, so im typing with one hand, hahaha
cocobean30012 2 years ago
wow did not expect that about annie!
last laughed about 15 minutes ago. me and my other friends were sitting around my kitchen table talking about one of our teachers i know its mean but it was super funny!! you would have to know the teacher!!! =P
KJonasfan595 2 years ago
ooooh! i didnt know Annie wasnt able to have children! but...she is? whoaaa. lol. i loved it! post more soon!
jonasbrosfan1324 2 years ago
laughed last,probably right now. My friend just texted me and i laughed a little. She texted me ho, so i was like thanks,and then she was all confused cause she didn't mean to text that, so she was like, But on cat in the hat he says, you dirty hoe oh i'm soryr baby i loove you! i was like wow. lol.That's one of our fav parts of that movie. :] But I'm happy that even though Annie was told she couldn't, that she's having a baby. I hope that nothing goes wrong though. :'[ Can't wait for more!! :]
JBRoxMySox2 2 years ago
wonderful, as always!
Sweetheart0099 2 years ago
we never did find out EXACTLY what happened to annie...
that part about her not being able to have children really caught me off guard, though. didn't expect that!
excellent chapter! :)
and, the last time i laughed... about ten minutes ago. i was telling my mum stories from when we went to italy, and now i really REALLY miss it. :(
wish i was going back lol.
x
DougBob93 2 years ago