FanFic Critic Episode 129: "Cupcakes"

It happened...it finally happened. One of the most notorious My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic fanfiction has finally been requested to be read by the FanFic Critic herself...and she is NOT happy. View at your own risk.

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[InvaderEli66]

I read this fanfic as an 11 year old and was not disturbed in the slightest, in fact I loved it. How is it that a lady over 20 and every other person on the planet is so irked by this thing?

[FanFicCritic]

@InvaderEli66 Perhaps you have issues, kid.

[MsPerryRocks]

Oh lord...I was looking you up on youtube the other day, and on the suggestions said Fanfic Critic Cupcakes, and I was like O.O Oh my god... Ok, the fanfic now made Pinkie Pie one of my least favorite characters O_o I'm just not to fond of her..another good review ^_^

P.S Your the best comedian ever :D

[FanFicCritic]

@MsPerryRocks Thanks!

[CTOONfan1]

I just thought I'd make a few notes for you. One, the skull with a beak belonged to Gilda, an old friend of Rainbow Dash's. Two, he did mean to say parasprite. It's a creature in the show. And three, there is a part after the "gonna make a friend" where a little girl named Silver Spoon is about to have the same thing done, but another little girl Apple Bloom comes in to stop her as Pinkie promised she could do it this time since Silver Spoon is a bully of hers.

[FanFicCritic]

@CTOONfan1 Thanks for telling me. ^_^ I don't watch the show.

[FanFicCritic]

@AlukaKaiserin Thank you for pointing out my pronunciation issues. I know I have them but for the two years I've been doing this show, no one has ever brought them up! XD

[123naruhina]

@SorceressKassandra It's just creepier than Cupcakes and Le Petite Four

[123naruhina]

@SorceressKassandra It's not very scary, just the same amount of scariness as cupcakes but the ending is sweeter. [It's not like Cupcakes were she sews Rainbow Dash. Since your not going to read, I'll spoil it. Rarity, being killed, actually makes an odd request. Sweetie Belle isn't to be killed. Pinkie kills Rarity but takes Sweetie Belle's number out.] Sweet Apple Massacre didn't need to even be created!

[SorceressKassandra]

@123naruhina Sadly I have read that one. -_- I wasn't traumatized, I was super pissed off and nearly punched my computer screen. But other then that, and gritting my teeth everytime I hear the word "Eeyep" I've been okay. I don't even want to imagine what Le Petite Four is about though. >.<

[AwesomenessItself87]

I read this fic, alone, at night and I didn't find it disturbing :/

[123naruhina]

@CTOONfan1 I looked in the whole Cupcakes section and found nothingggg.

[123naruhina]

@SorceressKassandra O.O You did that? I was eating while reading it...I didn't even care XD I read Le Petite Four and done the same thing...you shouldn't read Sweet Apple Massacre. I'm still traumatized from it D:

[CTOONfan1]

@123naruhina Check the copy on Equestria Daily.

[123naruhina]

@CTOONfan1 Tell me where to find that part! I've been looking for it.

[SorceressKassandra]

Yeah after I read this thing I ate nothing but crackers and water for almost 12 hours, and I had to watch god knows how many cute cat videos to get it out of my mind.