First series here,no rude comments please but suggestions would be nice..:)
Characters:
Justin Bieber-famous popstar,jerk(:P)
Katie Louise Smith-bullied at school
Pattie Bieber- Justin's mom
Jazmyn Bieber-Justin's younger sister
Derrek Smith-Katie's dad
Marlene Smith-Katie's mom
Angelou Marie Russo-Katie's bestfriend
Ryan Butler-Justin's bestfriend
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Katie's POV
i just got home from work. Its summer time so its a perfect time to earn money. I dont want to depend on my parents much. Asking why? lets just say that my mom hates me and when my dad bought me stuuf we need to keep it a secret or my mom would be mad.
Derrek: hows work Katie?
Katie: its good..*smiles*
Derrek: can you prepare our dinner?
Katie: sure dad,where's mom?
Derrek: she's out with her friends so dont make dinner for her..
Katie: okay*prepares dinner*
(A/N they finished eating dinner)
Derrek: i'll wash the dishes..
Katie: dad no! i'll do it*smiles,wash the dishes*
Derrek: im lucky to have a daughter like you*smiles*
Katie: *sighs* i hope mom would think that too dad,she doesnt even want me calling her mom..
Derrek: *sighs* go to bed now hun, you have work tomorrow..
Katie: night dad*goes to her room*
Marlene: *arrives,goes to the kitchen*
Derrek: there's no more food Marl..
Marlene: why?!
Derrek: i told Katie to prepare dinner for us only..
Marlene: that girl is so gonna get it! *shouts* KATIE!!!
Katie: *runs out of her room* mom..
Marlene: HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO TELL YOU NOT TO CALL ME MOM?!
Katie: *looks down* sorry..
Marlene: WHY DIDNT YOU PREPARE DINNER FOR ME?!
Katie: coz dad told me not to, you're out with your friends so we thought that you'll eat dinner there..
Marlene: you're just a problem in this house!*goes to her room*
Katie: *sighs,goes to her room too*
Katie's POV
i sit on the floor,hugged my knees and cry. My mom really hate me. Honestly i dont want to live her anymore. This place is too small for me and my mom but im just thinking about my bestfriend,Angelou. She stood up for me everytime I was bullied and the effect, nobody wants her too. Its just the two of us.
-the next 3 episodes are boring(just like this one,lol). its just the beginning so i guess the other episodes will be not so boring anymore. Next episode is Justin's.-
(again,im just new here and i wrote lots of stories before but my sister is my only reader,haha.suggestions would be nice)
Hmph, you deserve more comments. I LOVE IT!! Hold on Ima post when I actually read it lol... and you have A LOT of views lol. I write stories too wanna collab? I like collabing. It's funner. It's not a word, but I like it lol
friendamonium 1 year ago
@friendamonium nice
aicel11 1 year ago