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This is a song I'm writing in memory of Neda Agha-Soltan (ندا آقا سلطان ) who was slain by a Basij militia's shot through the heart on June 20, 2009 in the streets of Tehran. Right now I have the piano part done, but I'm still working on the lyrics and arrangement using my Korg Triton synthesizer. When the whole piece is ready, I'll upload a full devotion memorial with my song.
Here's the lyrics (they are open to adjustment):
Verse 1
On the street her body bled
As we watched her soul had fled
On the day that Neda died
At the moment of her passing
You could hear the angels cry
For the life that had gone by
Neda gave her life to bring forth liberty
She dreamed one day to see her nation free
Her call will break her people from
The chains that bound God's love
From the hearts of men
Don't you hear her calling to be free
Verse 2
Without warning a shot came
And struck her heart with perfect aim
To take a life that had no blame
Hear Neda's call for freedom's victory
In a land that couldn't bear
The price for truth her life had paid
Neda's life has not been lost in tragedy
Someday it will set her nation free
Neda gave her life so that
Her people find the strength to no longer fear
Enemies of love that made her dear.
Chorus
Neda's life was lost for victory
She's the calling to be free
In the streets where Neda's body laid
Were sown the seeds of liberty
Neda's life was lost for victory
She's the calling to be free
In the streets where Neda's body laid
Were sown the seeds of liberty
Iran be free........
Iran be free........
Iran be free........
Iran be free........
it was beautiful and amazing
poeticfairyeyez 1 month ago
I love it! You can sense the sadness, power, and beauty behind it. Perfect for a tragedy like Neda's. I favorite you.
LDSliverhead 1 year ago
Great song! Bravo! 5*s, easily earned & Favorited!
Montagraph 2 years ago
so beautiful...thank you....music can help to change the world...maybe you can listen to the song from ron buitenhuis, we believe. (I'm one of the back-ground singers)
emarensia 2 years ago
Amazing ... so beautifull dan't put in words. made me cry again!! LONG LIVE IRAN!
Joviaa 2 years ago
Beautiful composition....there is so much power in the music that it almost doesn't need lyrics. Amazingly done!
Peace!
Jovifan84 2 years ago
A Most Humble Moment ...
Most Humbly Done
Bend49er 2 years ago
Beautiful Composition.
Beautifully Executed.
You are the wind beneath her wings.
Bend49er 2 years ago
it's wonderful! great work!!!
HoNeY2MoNeY4LoVe 2 years ago