This would be my second draft.
Well since I couldn't find a really dark and gritty room to film in for my upcoming short film, Ghost. I basically made my own 3D room using Adobe After Effects to capture the feel of the film and use for the actual production. So here is my almost complete room.
Some feedback would be awesome! ^__^
Lol Much better lighting this time. The greeny colour is better.
Those numbers on he door feel superimposed. They feel.. TOO WHITE? If that makes sense. Maybe try 'rusting' them up or something .. I dunno..
The beam lighting is good - Maybe try making the light of the room a lot brighter when the ceiling light goes on full. And when it goes dimmer making the room A LOT darker.
It'll add to the eerie; dark and scary theme of the room.
it's very good though dude xD
OblivionXXI 8 months ago