☼Live at Mac's Tavern, "Define What's Inside" an Original Song by Saramary☼

☼Tonight was the first open mic night that I've done in over 10 years. It felt so good to get back up on the stage and perform! Please comment and let me know what you think. Sorry the video quality isn't that good.☼

☼Define What's Inside☼
☼An Original By Saramary☼

You poor selfish girl
That blackens my whole existence
A pathetic waste of breathe
Whose wounds are all self inflicted
You say growing old
Is so damn hard
When you're only 25
Being alone
Is easier than
To just recognize
That what defines
What's inside
Gets lost in an ocean of lies
I understand
Why you keep your head down
So keep hiding away
It's not like you live anyway
Because growing old
Is so damn hard
When you're only 25
Being alone
Is easier
Than just to recognize
That what defines
What's inside
Gets lost
In an ocean of lies
You can build it up
You can break it down
You can rise above
Or just lie down
Just don't give in
Don't drown
You will see
The world different now

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[PlaceSoFarAway]

Some pretty chords, and good singing thoughout. You have a really nice tone to your voice! My only criticism is that I think it needs a little more of a hook. Good job overall, though.

[saramary33]

@PlaceSoFarAway

☼Yeah, still workin' on that. But, getting there. I was actually just so proud that I actually got up and performed to be honest! I haven't been on the stage in over 10 years. It was a HUGE step for me. Thank you so much for taking the time to watch my performance and comment! It means a lot to me!☼

[deeryker]

It didnt do anything for me on this first listen,,,ill visit it again on your page,,,,

[saramary33]

@deeryker

☼Thank you for watching and commenting!☼

[Mendips251]

Excellent, good song and performance. Thumbs up.

Cheers

BoB

[saramary33]

@Hippie1944

☼Thank you!☼

[PlaceSoFarAway]

@saramary33 Yeah, that takes alot of guts and courage to play in front of people! I give ya props for that! :)