Favourite sin *episode 1*

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Here the plot of the new story: Demi's mom is really sick and the treatment is very expensive. They can't afford it. The Oller family, friend of the Lovatos, propose to pay for it if Demi marries their son, Tony. Demi wants to help her mom so she accepts. She marries the guy and moves with him in a villa in Beverly Hills. On his side, Joe also needs money but for his studies. The villa Oller needs workers so Joe is taken as a handy man. He soon caught Demi's eye and they start an affair.



~Lovato's condo~
Demi's mom coughed really hard.

Demi: Mom, are you ok?

Demi's mom: Yeah *she coughed harder in a tissue*

Demi: *she saw blood on the tissue* I'm bringing you to the hospital.

Demi's mom: *she shook her head* No.

Demi: Mom, you have ____________ (A/N: Insert a dicease here). So let's go.

Demi's mom: *she sighed* Fine.

Demi: I'm driving.


~At the hospital~
The doctors had checked on Demi's mom. They were in a room. Her mom was laying down while Demi was sitting next to her. A doctor came in.

Demi: So?

Dr: Mrs Lovato, your body started to reject the treatment.

Demi's mom: What should we do?

Dr: There is another treatment. A more efficient one.

Demi: It's great.

Dr: The thing is it's really expensive.

Demi's mom: How expensive?

Dr: ______$ (A/N: Insert a lot of money here)

Demi's mom: We can't afford such an amount of money.

Dr: I'm really sorry *he left the room*

Mr Oller was here for his monthly check up when he heard about Demi's mom.

Mr Oller: *he stopped the doctor* Is Dianna Lovato here?

Dr: Yes *he walked away*

Mr Oller knocked on the door.

???: Come in.

Mr Oller: Hello.

Demi's mom: Richard?

Mr Oller: Hi Dianna.

Demi's mom: Demi, this is Richard Oller. An old friend of the family.

Demi: Hi.

Mr Oller: Hey *he smiled* I haven't see you since...*he stopped himself*

Since when? Since Demi's dad died when she was a kid.

Demi's mom: Yeah.

Mr Oller: I heard about your dicease.

Demi's mom: Oh. You probably know that we haven't enough money.

Mr Oller: That's why I'm here. I'm proposing to pay for it.

Demi's mom: Really? You would do that?

Mr Oller: I have one condition.

Demi: I knew it.

Demi's mom: Be quiet, Demi. He's trying to help us.

Mr Oller: How old are you, Demi?

Demi: Almost 19.

Mr Oller: My son, Tony, is 21. He's gonna be in charge of the compagny so he needs a wife. People don't trust bachelors in business.

Demi: You want me to marry him?

Mr Oller: Yes. If you do so, I'll pay for the treatment and your studies in college (A/N: it's summer)

Demi: That's a big decision.

Mr Oller: I know *he gave her a card* Call me when you made up your mind.

Demi took the card and Mr Oller left after saying goodbye.



Questions:

1: What do you think?
2: Fav part?


~Desperate and ready to fight for Jemi~

~Head over heels for Joe Jonas club~

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  • 1. awesome :D

    2. all XD

    i said aids and 105, 000, 052$ :D lol.

  • thanks

  • 1) Cool!!!

    2) All of it :)

    You can make Demi's mom have bronchitus

    It's a lung infection and it makes you cough up blood :)

  • good idea

  • 1)Loved it <3

    2)the whole thing

  • thanks

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  • For the disease, I forget what it's called but it's the leading death in the Edgar Allen Poe poems. His mother had it and his wife had it. I just can't remember the name of it GAH...watch me remember it later though.

  • thanks

  • 1. Love the plot! :)

    2. Everything!

    MORE PLEASE!!!

  • thanks

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