Rivalry - moving storyboard #1

Working Title: Rivalry

So the reason why I haven't been posting much (even though I want to) is that I've been very busy with my university minor. I'm doing a course called Imagination (horrible name eh?) anyway the idea is that you create a 60 second animation during this course.
The final idea is to create in 3d (they use maya, but I'll sneak in some blender stuff ^_^) but the first two months were focussed on the story telling / design of the animation.

I'm a horrible storyteller but this is the result of two months of working (well actually one week, because I kept changing my story).
The idea: there are two engineers/scientists who are trying to best each other at rocketry. They launch rockets from their workplace and tensions get high. Then the door is knocked down and they are arrested. The final shot is that of the city, in ruins, because of their rockets / rivalry.

Next week is the final pitch, then the teachers will decide if I can continue with the minor (if I don't have all the products or they are too crappy they can kick out of the course). After the pitch the 15 best stories are picked and finished in 3d, so you can expect some more 3d stuff coming up soon (if I get through the pitch that is :p) though it might not be this story.

Huge wall of text, but ty for watching, comments and critique are very much welcomed, this is the first (moving) storyboard I ever made, and anything that can help me improve is appreciated.

Category:

Film & Animation

Tags:

• moving
• storyboard