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Uploaded by on Oct 11, 2007

*Okay so this is a poem that I submitted into a contest! And well I had to shorten it to go with the music! So here's the whole thing:
Loving Him~
I look at him with such disdain,
but my feelings for him do not change.

As I look up to the sky wondering why,
I start to cry.

Because loving him,
Is mostly grim.

And knowing him,
Is usually slim.

But I can hear his heartbeat,
and how it is soft and sweet.

I love him so much,
but he's so hard to touch.

And I can tell he wants to love,
but someones taken his heart and they won't give it back.

And as tears stream,
I have to say goodbye.
And as I feel so mean,
I can not lie.
Loving him is like whipcream,
he never satifies.


Copyright ©2007
if you liked my poem plz comment!
It would be great! THanx again, 2 all of my subscribers! I can't believe I have 100! Ekk! I love that word! Oh and I made an xanga just for like Zanessa stuff and info about the show and polls and contests but it ain't all ready but check it out kay!
http://weblog.xanga.com/truely_zanessa13
Thanx everyone! And 1 last thing if I win I get an Ipod so that would be great if you would vote! Thanx!*

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  • That was so beautiful you should be a poem:)

  • Thanx!

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  • thanx

  • yes i did

  • thanx! And Thanx! Maybe i'll win that ipod! hehe! just joking just hearing allthis is cool!

    <3nikki

  • well the poem 30 mins! It was like last year! The vid. took about an hour maybe? hehe! Thanx 4 calling me smart!

  • thanx! did you happen to vote?

  • Really smart!! How long time did it take to do it?

  • that is seriously my new favorite poem

    it was amazing!! i totally voted for you!

  • YES!

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