Galleon (Original)

Another original song. Hope you like it. :)
~ Elliott

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"Days fly, rolling like a cloud forever to a
New sky, painted each and every morning by the
Sunshine, every little bit of nature grows a
Lifetime, following a light elusive to my eyes
And even when I'm sailing in the wrong direction
I feel the guiding hand of something wise.

Some say, nothing really happens blindly well it
Just may, be that I'm arriving finally at my
Cross wind, when I leave the world behind me and I
Fall in, will I get a chance to see the other side?
Perhaps the greatest journey lies beyond pretending
Life is just a temporary ride.

It runs, deeper than the water, farther than a man can comprehend
Maybe it won't even have an end.

Islands, in the middle of the ocean bring me
Silence, how I long to stop the motion of this
Shipwreck, I've been going round in circles running
Breakneck, navigating by the faintest morning star
Maroon me on the sand until my next departure
Free me from this weary avatar.

It runs deeper than the water, farther than a man can comprehend
Maybe it won't even have an end
Hotter in Sahara in the sun
You'll find me on this lonely galleon."

(copyright 2009, Elliott Kimmel)

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• original
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• acoustic
• guitar
• singer
• songwriter
• elliott
• kimmel
• zerobio

[Oswlek]

I should add that your leadwork is consistently excellent. Impressive playing, but never overwhelming. Clearly the song is your priority, which is the way to go in my book.

[zerobio]

Yes sir, the song is the priority. Hey I'm really happy you came to this particular song, doesn't get much feedback usually but it's actually one of my favourites. Anyhow, thanks a lot and take care of yourself.

[zerobio]

@Oswlek So sorry i missed replying to you. Thank you very much buddy! I really appreciate that. And me and Dini are constantly checking your channel. When we get to Canada and have decent internet, we will be in touch.

[Oswlek]

You did this one right with the active bassline.

Amazing lift on "elusive to my eyes", that F#7 was perfect there. Then the chord progression of the chorus was brilliant.

[zerobio]

Hey buddy, I really appreciate how indepth your feedback is ... you dig the music and give great comments about specifics. Thanks a lot!

~ Elliott

[zerobio]

@yapalapdapa16 Sorry for the delay. Thanks again for watching

[zerobio]

Thanks so much! I will keep it up.

[Fusionartist202]

Your a true professional! Sounds so natural for you!

Keep having Fun!

[zerobio]

I'm really glad you liked it! :)

[Tovatsg]

great absolutely fantastic. love the guitar playing.