Jypsie Laine - Rainy Day (Original)

This is the first song I wrote with music put to it.

I wrote this song because it rained in California after a very long drought, so I just started writing.

Please Comment and rate!!! I can take criticism, I just want to hear what you think!

Copyright 2009

Category:

Music

Tags:

• guitar
• Rainy Day
• Jypsie
• Laine

[Wishmeluck7713]

Hey Lady! Good stuff! ;)

[guitargirljc90]

@Wishmeluck7713 Thanks :)

[Moski12]

beautiful song!

[guitargirljc90]

@Moski12 Thanks, it's so old and no really my best but sense this video I've been so picky about the music that I never finish, and I can't sing acapella

[NeonRocks377]

Hae guitargirl!! Im the girl off Shelfari (FudgeMonsta_rawr) thats a great song but i dont really think the guitar goes with the vocals.. but as someone earlier said, good dynamics.. could you maybe post the progression and lyrics to me on my profile or something and i'll see if i can help if thats ok

[guitargirljc90]

Thanks for checking out my video, and thanks for the offer, but I wrote this song months ago, and I've moved on to other songs (which I should post) and it's not one of my best songs, so I think I'm just going to focus on other projects.

I hope to post a video explaining what I want to post next, like what songs. I'm not a very good singer but I MIGHT post a video of me singing one of my originals acapella, and see if anyone has any suggestions for me. But probably not for awhile.

[ryanreynamusic]

it's got a good concept, you just need to work on the meshing of the lyrics, in the beginning it's good, you just start to rush it as you go farther into the song, I think you should slow it down, does that help?

[ryanreynamusic]

Heey Thanks for adding me in the credits!:) How are you doing?

[guitargirljc90]

Thank you so much!

[INFLAMESROCKER]

good guitar playing

[guitargirljc90]

thank you so much, I will do just that ; )

[patti12string2006]

Critical comments from a guitar teacher:

Your lyrics are wonderful. You are very good on guitar although the guitar work is too loud for the vocals. Work on smiling occasionally, get some vocal training and you might go far as a singer/songwriter.