Run Away (original song by me)

This is one of the songs I wrote. It still needs a little work on the strumming and singing (the camera stresses me out). Tell me what you think of it :)

(here are lyrics)

she's looking at you,
you're holding her hand,
how could she know you're going to hurt her tonight?
she's smiling at you,
you're walking beside her,
telling her words of youth.

she'll find out in time, you'll see,
right now she can't understand
what you're doing to her,
what you did to me,
and i know, i'm still ashamed.

(chorus)
something inside me is screaming,
run away
run away
and i will be there,
holding her hand.
you've done enough,
leave her alone,
spare her the childhood i never had.

the moment you walked away
i can't tell you how much relief you gave to me,
the touch of your hand,
the look in your eyes,
sends me screaming from inside.

i'm weak to the knee,
the visions of you
keep on coming back to me.
i'm lost and confused,
thanks to you,
now don't ever let that happen to her.

(chorus)

let her run away,
don't lay your hand upon her face.
she's just a child,
don't let your dreams run wild and free.

.copyright.

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Tags:

• Run
• Away
• original
• song
• by
• me

[watinator69]

*clapping wildly* Meaning, good lyrics, beautiful voice, and so on. I love this song very much. And it's relatable. I've been through shit like that, so I love it ten times more. keep up the amazing work.

[waterillusion]

I'm glad this song found you. Thanks for your comment ;)

[Madmatt18]

very nice 5 stars keep up your style

[waterillusion]

Thanks! I'll try my best :)

[nocturnalbeauty94]

is this song about a child(girl) bien abused and same thing happend to u and now u want a gud life for her cuz u didnt have a gud childhood ??

[waterillusion]

Somewhere along those lines, yes. But in reality, this hasn't happened to me. I wrote it for somebody else...

Thanks for watching!

[theEddievanhalen]

lol ive written a song called the Run-Away

[hummingbird4444]

Funny how "Run away" is an ispiring title for a song, I've also written a Run Away, check it out if you want :o)

[kattwilliams200]

Great song !! Your voice is amazing and you showed so much emotion in your face and voice. The song really touched me because i can relate to what is sounds like is happening. Great job !!

[xLuciferProductionsx]

nice song. i dont know how i came across it but im glad i did. can i rate over a 5?

[TheFrenchers]

Very pretty song, good work!!! Check out "she's on her way" on youtube, Username: TheFrenchers.

[needasecondchance]

It's fabulous, real good song & music, nice voice, Patrick (Ireland)

[gshyam3k]

nice one :D

[monkeyknackers]

I would really love to learn this song on piano, can you send me the chord pattern, Ps: very beautiful song my ears say thankyou.

[PoppeTheStar]

You are really good my friend, keep it up you got a talent. Just think about how to change over to the chorus, get´s a little strange when swifting there, but otherwise it was awesome =D. You´r the best =)!!!!!

[lazar959595]

tempo drastically changes when u get to chords, but u have talent for writing songs:)