IF I HAD TO CRITIQUE THIS SONG (in my opinion as a long serving Sngwriter and Musician)then i would say this...."This track needs has a huge place in it for AT LEAST TWO VERSES.with a different MELODY from what you hear here.
and the line "no one to dance with as the Chors parts.Only my view,but.."JUST TRY IT ,if you can create a tunefull melody for some verses then a simple flowing bridge will work Great
I RATHER LIKE THIS SONG,IT EVOKES SENSES OF
A WELL KNOWN BALD HEADED IRISH GIRL....S.C
IF I HAD TO CRITIQUE THIS SONG (in my opinion as a long serving Sngwriter and Musician)then i would say this...."This track needs has a huge place in it for AT LEAST TWO VERSES.with a different MELODY from what you hear here.
and the line "no one to dance with as the Chors parts.Only my view,but.."JUST TRY IT ,if you can create a tunefull melody for some verses then a simple flowing bridge will work Great
siouxdanny1 3 years ago