Star Trek Dauntless Trailer

The Trailler for the Star Trek Dauntless SRP.
By Jantrix and Martin Thompson, please vote for us at TLO!

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[CmdrMartinThompson]

@StimuLAZ

If you have any suggestions to make future trailers better, I'd bet happy to hear them.

What I have gathered so far is that you didn't like the fact I put a general "You?" at the end of the video.

Please keep in mind that the video is targeted at people who actually have played RPG-X before

and know what it is about.

[StimuLAZ]

@CmdrMartinThompson I don't think I have rated the video badly.

I have indicated a dislike for your video and I think I know what that means. I do not see any clear instance of bad editing but that does not mean it is a good video. I offer criticism which can be constructive unless you are determined to deny the validity or ignore the possible relevance of my opinion. The offer stands and there is more if you decide that you can do something with it.

[CmdrMartinThompson]

@StimuLAZ

From what you say I gather that the video just generally doesn't appeal to you

thats verry possible.

However, I asked the question to get some constructive critism on the video, maybe

people could tell me what they don't like. For instance bad editing.

If you just generally don't like the video, I just can't do anything with that, I can't change your taste nor do I want to. This is however not a reason

to rate a video badly. If you don't like it doesn't mean it is a bad video.

[StimuLAZ]

@CmdrMartinThompson In that case it does not seem to be a trailer.

I have rated the video according to what I like, and to pretend that I like it would be dishonest. I suggest you post it in a forum for TLO members since it is not meant for any other YouTube users.

You have asked who doesn't like this video. My answer is I don't like this video. No joke!

You have also asked "what don't you like?" Seriously, I have told you (some of) what I don't like (about this video).

[CmdrMartinThompson]

@StimuLAZ

This was also only meant to get people who where already a member of TLO to vote for the RP. It introduces

the story and it's characters and shows a couple of quick scenes from the first episode.

It was never meant to be a marketing video for someone who is not familliar with TLO or Role Playing in RPG-X EF.

[StimuLAZ]

@CmdrMartinThompson I thought the concept of a trailer is to attract peoples interest in something.

In this case it would be an interest in a role playing game and possibly TLO membership. Since I fail to see any attraction in playing the role, and don't even see what that role may be, this video seems to be a failed marketing attempt. As a marketing video I do not see that there is anything to like.

I dislike this video.

[CmdrMartinThompson]

@StimuLAZ

If you where a member of TLO, you would know. This is a Trailer for a

serial role play. That is a concept in which people go into the game you see bits

of in the trailer and act out an original Star Trek story episode.

The You? part implies that it is possible for everyone who has the game

to sign up for the RP and pick a position they like.

If you don't know what the video is about, please don't rate it untill you do.

[StimuLAZ]

@CmdrMartinThompson Seriously, assuming you wrote the text at the beginning, a short story may be more interesting than this video.

That was not me at the end. I do not look anything like that model and I can not think of any reason to play a part in the "action" of this video. I don't even see what the action is supposed to be and I don't like the suggestion that I would want to be there.

Does that answer your question Commander, sir?

[CmdrMartinThompson]

Oh noes, more ppl don't like this, whats there not to like? :P

[CmdrMartinThompson]

WHO DOESNT LIKE THIS VIDEO! XD j/k, seriously though, what don't you like?