i hv to concur with the rest of the comments below, it is a good try, but if I had as much patience and willingness to spare time to make and post a short video, I would ask for some friends to proof-read and give feedback for improvement ( if any ) . But, don't stop trying...take it as a lesson-learnt and don't give up.
They are English words but no coherent thoughts. Sorry, try harder. We learn from our mistakes, so don't be discourage of our comments.
taby32 2 months ago
i hv to concur with the rest of the comments below, it is a good try, but if I had as much patience and willingness to spare time to make and post a short video, I would ask for some friends to proof-read and give feedback for improvement ( if any ) . But, don't stop trying...take it as a lesson-learnt and don't give up.
Wbs2225 1 year ago
umm no offense or anything but your grammar is horrible, u should get it checked out before posting the story like this.
lunaticrose13 1 year ago
can't understand ur eng......
aspflo 1 year ago
please upload this movie here at youtube .
djma26 2 years ago 2