Caleb
Uploader Comments (fallenrosemedia)
All Comments (19)
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OMG what a great film!
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Yes, I'm quite curious about this myself.
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good idea
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well done everyone....but all i have to say to the stupid glasses man is....its called a abortion, Gosh!
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It was really good, the story was easy to follow, but Caleb's death could have been more convincing. I mean, seriously. He was stabbed like fifteen times, and no blood? That was my only criticism really.
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That was a very sad sroty, it almost made me cry :(. But very very very awesome acting!!!
birllant casting!!!
WELL DONE!
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=O this is shot in redcliffe! haha, good work, i loved it. mainly coz i recognised places from every shot, but it was a great movie.
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The story was good and easy to follow. The others suggest that it is perdicatble, but so many films are and I didnt see it as an issue. All in all i think it is a fantastic effort and off a quality that doesnt make you have issues with sitting through its 20 minutes. Prehaps seek help from people who have some experience in there relavent feilds to help with audio and lighting in your next film which I am sure, like this one will be fantastic.
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On the up side, the soundtrack was very good and fit well, this is often something that is a let down in films and its good to see you were ontop of it. The acting was satisfactory and mostly believable but perhaps the parts where it feel short were more noticable due to the issues with audio.
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If this was the effect you were going for I dont know. Audio and lighting were the parts that i feel came up short. None of the shots were under exposed but lighting I feel could have been used to better set the mood. Im sure you are aware of any problems with audio so I will not cover them again.
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overdub later on as a problem solver? also try and keep to one format, 4:3 or wide as to maintain continuity. handheld camera not good on long shots but great when cut in jumps! could be a tad tighter though. all in all another improvement and to make a 20min short is quite impressive. I would love to see what you can do with a 5-10 min short and the same time to do it in as a 20min. keep improving!
leecircus 4 years ago
hi cathy, just one thing, the whole movie is 16:9. in what part do you think it changes from that format?
fallenrosemedia 4 years ago