Uploaded by nltluvr92195 on Jan 10, 2009
Hey guys! this is like a little thing for you, because you guy cant seem to wait till the 17th. It's kinda like.... a flash thing. whenever I put [*Flash*], then im flashing to another scene in the next season. but here's the trick, you dont know WHO is saying these things. BUM BUM BUUUUUMMMMM!!!!!!
ok, here goes nothing:
"Who was that?" she asked. He looked at the ground. he seemed ashamed.
"that was um...my girlfriend...."
Her jaw dropped.
"your...your girlfriend?" she said, her voice breaking as she said the accursed G word.
"I'm sorry..." he couldnt finish his sentence. the look on her face said it all.
"no...no, it's ok...what else were you supposed to do?"
"I'll always love you..."
she shook her head, shaking all the feeling of happiness when he said that. She knew it couldn't mean anything anymore.
"I- You- Goodbye."
He reached his arm towards her face, as if he wanted to cup her face in his hands, but she caught it in her hand.
"no...don't...please dont make this worse." she whispered.
she held his hand for a second longer and closed her eyes. a single tear slid down her cheek. She breathed in deeply and let his hand go. In her mind this was metaphoric for letting go...forever.
[*Flash*]
"Excuse me?"
She looked up at the voice with the heavy english accent.
"Yes?"
"Well don't you remember me?" he asked, his face squished in frustration.
"um...no. Who are you?" she asked. Confusion in her voice.
"Well I'm your fiance..."
[*Flash*]
She stuttered. "I'm- I'm- I'm REALLY sorry!" she ran towards the door. He caught her and stopped her.
"why are you sorry?" he asked innocently.
"I shouldn't have done that! it was innopropriate and I'm sorry. Again!"
She tried to get to the door again, but he just held on tighter.
"Dont be sorry." he whispered. "I cant stand to see your pretty face so sad."
She blinked rapidly.
"What!?" she asked incrediously.
He smiled a dazzling smile. "How can you not see it?" he asked.
"See what!?"
He didnt answer. He leaned in and kissed her softly on her lips.
"See that."
[*Flash*]
"Can we talk?" he asked softly.
"Sure!" she asked. He lead her into the next room. They sat across from each other.
"yes?" she asked, waiting.
He didnt say anything.
"Are you gonna say anything? 'Cause I'm getting impatient."
"I.... I just dont think this is gonna work out... us, i mean. Sorry."
She was speechless.
[*Flash*]
she walked out of the bathroom slowly. Her eyes never leaving the small stick in her hand."
"well?" He asked expectantly.
"I- I'm pregnant..."
[*Flash*]
"I can't believe you!" she yelled at him. She turned sharply on to a dark road.
"I SAID I'M SORRY! What more do you want!?"
she shook her head furiously.
"There's nothing TO do! I just.....UGH! that was so...degrading! You're sleeping on the couch!"
"It's not my fault!"
She threw her hands in the air, not holding the wheel for a second.
"Not your fault! that is the STUPIDESS thing you have EVER said! And you say a lot of stupid things!" They crossed a big intersection. He looked at her furiously. His eyes widened as a bright light flooded the car.
"What!?" she asked.
In that instant the car was knocked sideways. Glass spilling everywhere. Everything went black.
OK! So what do you think? try to see if you can guess who's in each "Flash"!
also, I'm thinking of changing the format. so instead of this:
person: HI!
it'll be this:
"Hi!" she said.
but im still thinking. I just think you can describe much more that way.
ANWAYS!!!!!!
Bye peoples! Hope you like it!!!!!
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keep it in the scrpit format....
my imagination describes it alll....
SarahLuvsBoyBands 3 years ago
is the last one JJ???
SarahLuvsBoyBands 3 years ago
wow sounds like a Kevin or JJ situation
iluvjj2008 3 years ago
AHHHHHHH!!!!!!
caseybear951 3 years ago
this sounds gud i can't wait
iluvtravisandjj3 3 years ago
i cant wait!!!! how about move it tom!
SarahLuvsBoyBands 3 years ago
ohh i can't wait!!
ADstylem 3 years ago
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! can i get more!!!
SarahLuvsBoyBands 3 years ago
I really cant wait for the chapter to come out!
twilightluver74 3 years ago
Wow!
Now
twilightluver74 3 years ago