The Vorkosigan Saga: Shards of Honor (beginning section)

Two would be enemies have a chance encounter and are instantly thrown into the vastness of space, impending war, and trials that they must overcome. Based on the books by the Locus award winning, Hugo and Nebula award winning, and New York Times Bestselling author Lois McMaster Bujold. C.R.H. Films(tm) is proud to present The Vorkosigan Saga: Shards of Honor.

Category:

Film & Animation

Tags:

• Space
• war
• action
• adventure
• Vorkosigan
• Bujold
• Aral
• Cordelia

[Nightfall117]

Um. After the title, the screen just goes black.

[VorkosiganSaga]

Yes, we are aware of this. We are currently adding on as we get things finished and none of us bothered to cut the song to match the video, which is a big whoops on our part. So please forgive us. It's by far not finished but we just wanted to post something :D From all of us we hope you keep checking in for updates.

Cinnamon Herrera

C.R.H. Films(tm)

[sendbillmoney]

The way it works in the real world is you finish the project THEN post it. If you can't commit enough to your project to do that, why would anyone devote time to seeing it?

P.S. Do you have permissions from any of the people whose work you're appropriating?

[RamBam3000]

Vorkosigan Saga - you're a lousy date you are: you get a girl all excited and then you don't ask her to dance.

What is this really, apart from what sounds like a Nickelback song?

[borogove32]

A couple recommendations:

Watch a bunch of your favorite trailers and take your timing cues from those. You spend WAY too much time in the 'produced in association with' stuff. Trailers are more fast-paced than that.

But even more fundamentally, GET THE SCALE RIGHT! I mean, the planet looks to be about 40 meters wide. The ship should disappear from view long before it gets a tenth of the way to the planet, much less around it.