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Holdin' On: A Nick Jonas Story Chapter 3

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Last post of this story for today! Comment? ily.
Who can guess the song in the video?
Name and who it's by! :D

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I smiled and signed the piece of paper she pushed over to me with a Sharpe (being Nick Jonas I sort of always had one on me). I slid it over the counter back to her. "Here you go."

"Ah!" She screeched, "thank you SO much!! I love you!" I smiled and opened my mouth to reply but instead, when I felt some hot breath on my neck, shut it and swallowed.

"Maybe I would like an autograph, too." I turned around nervously.

"Sure, thing." I said to one of those guys that had come in before. I took a step back and looked over his shoulder. The other guy was looking out the glass door. It was really ... freaky. I grabbed for the paper that I had used before and signed my signature again. My hand was slightly shaking and it took everything for me not to drop the freakin' pen. I felt Ellie's warm hand in my left one and glanced at her quickly. She was watching the other man intensely. Her blue eyes widened so I turned and also looked at the guy. He had locked the door. Oh, God.

"Nervous, Kid-O?" My eyes shot to the first guy standing next to me. I shook my head but he just laughed. "Yo, Chris. This famous kid is freaking out."

The other guy, Chris, laughed and walked toward us. "Is he now? Well, I bet if we took his little girlie then he'd be freakin' out even more."

Ellie squeezed my hand tighter and I pushed her behind me. "Don't touch her."

"Ha, ha. Hear that, Mike?" Both of them laughed and the first one, Mike I now knew, took another step forward.

"I'm serious." I said, backing up.

"Aw! The pop princess is serious." Mike laughed, hitting Chris's arm jokingly.

"Um, guys. I'm going to have to ask you to, um, leave, 'cause you're, like, disrupting the peace, or something." The girl from behind the counter said.

"Oh," Chris said. "Sure, sorry, love." He took a step back and turned around. Mike took a step back, too. "But," he took a breath and grabbed something from his pocket. "I can't do that." He turned around and my eyes widened and the girls screamed. He was holding a ... a gun!

"You know," the other guy, Mike, said, leaning up against the counter. "We were only planin' on robbing you, quick and easy. But now," he paused and laughed, "now we got you, Kid-O. I think ... " He trailed off and glanced at Chris. "I think we got perfect timing."

"Wh..." I paused and tried to swallow the lump in my throat. "What do you mean?"

"Weeeell. A lot of the world would be real sad if something happened to one of the ... what do you call yourselves? Brother something?"

"Jonas Brothers, man. Look, he's right here on this magazine." Chris said, tossing a magazine on the counter in front of us.

"Yeah, okay. One of the Jonas Brothers. So, if you were our, what they call, hostage, I think I'd work out just fine."

"H-hostage," I stuttered, "you want me to be a hostage?"

"No, Kid-O, not want you to be. You are. Simple as that." He said, standing up straight.

"N-Nick," Ellie whispered in my ear. I immediately shushed her. I squeezed her hand, which was clinging tightly to mine, our fingers interlaced.

"So, man, what's the plan?" Chris asked, flipping through the magazine.

"Well, let's go over here and talk. But keep a good eye on them." As he spoke, Mike walked toward the back. Chris followed him while keeping a 'good eye' on us. I watched them as they spoke quietly together in the back of the store.

"Nick," Ellie whispered again. I turned my attention to her and gently pulled her forward. "What's gonna happen?"

I sighed and pulled her into my chest. "I don't know." She hugged me tightly as I stroked her hair. "But, it'll be okay," I promised, though I wasn't really sure. I shot a glance at the girl behind the counter. She was watching the two men talk with a frightened expression displayed on her face. I looked from her to the two men, again. "How long can this last?" I wondered.
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One of you guessed it! YAY!

"Well, she got friendly down in the sandddddd." Sigh. I love John Travolta. Grease soundtrack, such a wonderful thing to listen to!(:
"Saaaaaaanddddddyyyyyyyyy"
(:

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Uploader Comments (JonasFanFic16)

  • you know im very sad at you ily bu im sad at you and i love this

  • why?

  • oh wow, i knew those two guys were trouble.

    did you know that when you search jonas fanfiction on youtube your stories/story playlists are listed third?

    i LOVE the Grease soundtrack!!

  • they ARE?!?!??!?!?!?!!?

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  • no!!!! nick!

    dont make fun of me but about four years ago, my friend was like "what if nick jonas died?"

    and i was like "nick can't die. hes an angel."

    hahahaha i was ten years old

    whew i've been a fan for a long time

  • WOW!! i soo knew trouble was gonna come as soonas those thugs entered tht store!! BUT I DID NOT EXPECT A KIDNAP..lol...i thought it was gonna be somethng lyk tht but idk mybe later lol.amazing ch :)

  • Ahh nooo what's going to happen??

    Ahh soo GOOODDDD!!!

  • LOVE IT!

    And I love YOU :)

  • OH MY GOSH! ahhh!! ahhhh!! ahhh!! ok... I'm good now. ahhhhh!! last one. I swear haha i suuuurely didnt expect that! thats freaky haha but i LOVE IT! but that's not breaking news haha

  • this is really really awesome!!! i love this story and the come what may too!!!

  • omg this is intense plz post more!!!

  • what an epic story :]

    and its only chapter 3!

    wooo

    your a genius babe :]

  • I love it! Post again soon!! :D

  • loved it! more?plz?

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