Temporary Girl - original

First off, thanks to Jessica for the great reversible cap, and really for all the good of this track. :)

Lyrics
the smile on her face
this energy i feel
seems almost out of place
it almost isn't real
i'm simple like a child
thinking like a fool
and happily decline
to play by any rules
to play by any rules

apparent in her face
the gods could not decide
for every shade of blue
is hold up in her eyes
and where can i begin
for this may take a while
i want to take her in
want to wade into her smile
wade into her smile

and why - do i - feel - so good
cause i - know i - will see her soon
my temporary girl

i'm gonna take her hand
and let her lead me down
the rabbit hole awaits
theres no one else around
i have no crystal ball
no sight for future days
only thing i need for now
a smile on her face
a smile on her face

repeat chorus

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[soulofbass]

you remind me of my friends the way you emote while you sing. i like this song, well done!

[petermichaelw]

@soulofbass Thanks for the feedback. Always good to have a visit from the Dewgun.

[edawg121]

i just listened again...this is beautifully written too, i read the lyrics a couple of times. Really good stuff

[petermichaelw]

@edawg121 My first song with some semblance of lyrical pride! Thanks Dawg!

[RyanUnplugged]

I'm glad you answered me with this account, I had no idea. Great song, would love to hear more.

[petermichaelw]

@RyanUnplugged Thanks for the visit and feedback Ryan!

[myfavo16]

Peter, this song could be in a movie. Wow!, To be honest I love this kind of genre. Your a great singer-songwriter too. Faved!

[sing1me2a3song]

I know I liked this song the first time I listened, but it's really resonating with me right now. The second verse is frickin' wow. And your voice is pulling on my heartstrings right now.

[chrishurnsolo]

Wow - I really like this song. Favourited. Awesome stuff, Peter.

[stevenelgirri]

very good, really brilliant, i can´t believe you´ve had so few visits. One of my favorite songs in the last twelve months, honestly!.

I don´t think the backing vocals really work at the end, but don´t take it the wrong way. keep up the great work and good luck

[petermichaelw]

@dmconley1 Thanks for the compliments, miss Conley

[petermichaelw]

@teeny00041 Thanks for the listen, Kristina.

[teeny00041]

Brilliant!