Alyssa Marie x Karmaloop Codes x Vikto Beats "Rap It Up" Contest - Lypse

Had to kind of rush this because I just found out about this contest a couple days ago. I'll include the chorus in the next round (provided I get picked of course lol). comments and ratings are appreciated as always.

Lyrics:
Dear lypse,
You've been sleeping in a cryogenic state
Centuries passed since the last time you've been awake
There's good chance that your mind has been erased
Due to brain inactivity, so i wrote the rhyme out just in case
If i had to be blatant and clear
The first thing that id say, is fuck our current state of affairs
I trying to be patient and fair, but I'm facing Despair
cause nothing has been changing in years
and uh, You see the, the one thing that you could literally note
Is society's on the decline, a slippery slope
And these thoughts just get in my head, and i often sit and pretend
That things are really okay, but my optimism is dead
See uh ,we walk around this political system
Where the rich are rich and the poor are just pitiful victims
And our freedoms are bargained, like we can discard them
And I feel as though I'm thrown in the middle of this and
You barren minds really need to bare in mind this
The world is overdue for a paradigm shift
But, I'm done, cause I'm really bout to lose control
I'll just go to sleep, and see what the future holds

Category:

Music

Tags:

• alysssamariiie
• karmaloop codes
• vikto beats
• contest
• lypse
• hip hop

[MtCody21]

YOU ARE DEEP!!!!!!!!

[lypse14]

@MtCody21 that's what the women tell me too lol

[ShakeDown2012]

I'm thinking about using some highlight footage down the road for my NBA 2K fans. I'll probably put it on Machinima and all that. If it's aight with you, I could advertise your channel by using one of your songs. Cause I can't lie... you one of the best I've heard on this youtube shit yo. That's a real song right there.

[lypse14]

@ShakeDown2012 ye man go ahead, but stay tuned, I'm going to do another verse to this soon!

[TheKingChizzle]

wtf u have more views n likes then the winners, n u lost ? this is mess up!!!

[lypse14]

@TheKingChizzle views and likes aren't a factor dude :P

[StillAware]

"and I often sit and pretend/ that life is really okay, but my optimism is dead" yeahhh

[city0fj]

so dope son! im impressed!

[eXwFLAMERO]

damn dude this is great

[aliforlife3]

yioooo get at me @lypse14... inbox me or sumn.. im a producer .. btw ure shit is RAWWW!!!

[xLinkinPark1994x]

Very nice man sub :)

[GravityFoxx]

Nice man, I really like this.