A song I wrote with my friend Morgan a couple months back. Comments?
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You said youd never hurt me, never make me cry
But now it seems like you try
For five long years we had this going on
Shaky in the middle, but it never felt wrong
At first I was pissed, at first I was mad
Yeah, everything sucked. Yeah, everything was bad.
If I love you, then why do I want to punch you?
When I see you, I see you flirting with her
Ive seen you angry, Ive seen you cry
Ive heard you laugh, Ive heard you sigh
I want you to be happy, I want me to be happy too
But I cant when you dont like me, and I love you
Lay on your bed with my head on your chest
Just you and I, screw all the rest
Now you like her, life passes me by
Cause I just sit there, and wonder why
You woke up one day, and decided to say
I dont love you now, so please stay away.
I fell to my knees, and the phone hit the floor,
When I heard you say, I cant do this anymore.
If you loved me, then whyd you have to break me?
Cause youve been there, youve been there through it all
Through the tears, through the stress
Through the good times, and through the deaths
Im begging you stop now, oh, dont let this start
Please, oh, please, dont rip out my heart
This is the story of my life and you wrote every page
I wish that you would let me out of your metaphoric cage
But your fragrance hypnotizes me, makes me sit still
And your lips caress me, you hurt me at your will
Youve invaded my mind, I dont even know how
And youre killing me slowly, but look who has the gun now.
The song is awesome, great job singing I love your voice H-L :)
-Julian
ItTakesII 3 years ago
Thank you =]
AnotherGirlSinging 3 years ago
i think you should slow it down
seems like the songs going way too fast
Aalaaline 3 years ago
Well, I did it fast because it's supposed to be angry. You're not exactly slow and mellow when you're mad =P
AnotherGirlSinging 3 years ago