My New Era Contest Entry For The New Era Rap Contest
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Lyrics:
To be honest I cant explain it im just spitting lyrics
Embarrassing others and thier peers just for the kicks
But I will kill your selfesteem just for the hell of it
Ill leave you with your pride no rapin I am a celibate
Your Speech less Helen Keller when I'm on the mic
I could stare you in the eyes and insall all of my fright
I'm sent from a Martian planet I'm leading this home invasion
Army of me plus you I don't need to solve the equation
Got a napoleon complex your coming up short
While I'm conquering from city to city and port to port
Attack you from the side and from up in the sky
Bombs falling aerial leap like jimmy the super fly
Its ridiculous my army's bursting at the seams
If you want you can switch sides, surrender to my team
Ima come after them with my lyrical judo
Now ill be proper and tell em goodnight toddles
Nice entry, thank you bro!
vudukatacomb 1 year ago
You've got a really good thing going, just tighten up your delivery bro. There were points where you couldnt incorporate your breathing so you cut words short, and that makes you sound unsure of your own lyrics. That takes away from the overall quality.
Other than that, I thought this was really good man.
CRUSH3Rdlux 1 year ago
nice lyrics, thaat helen keller line was dope! thumbs up=)
EmceePluto24 1 year ago
nice entry check out out mine
stevenreagan 1 year ago
lyrics on pt and flow was very nice! peep my entry
-Dee Vo
deevomusic1 1 year ago