Song I wrote. I doubled my singing in the choruses to improve the audio a lil. Hope you like it, here are the lyrics:
Don't Fall For A Taken Man
© Janette Marie 2009
I was waitin at the station for my train to leave
when a woman sat down in tears next to me
I asked why she cried, eyes bloodshot red
cigarettes on her breath as she said
ten years I held a man who had a wife
wish I'd been warned a lot earlier in life
CHORUS:
Don't fall for a taken man
he'll forget you the minute she calls his name
Stay away if you can
he'll say he loves you while he's still holdin her hand
and you're nothin but a pawn in a sinners game
When you fall for a taken man
As our train started goin, she reached in her coat
for a photo in her pocket, yellowed and old
she ripped it to pieces that fell like snow
said heres to finally lettin him go
I hope this strikes a chord you won't forget
Remember and you'll never have to owe my debt
CHORUS
Somehow that woman's words cut straight into my soul
And a mile from the next stop, I knew they'd follow me home
CHORUS
lovely vocal enjoyed the tune
Robbyd91 2 months ago
great song !!! :D
92KATIEKAT 10 months ago
wow...this is so sad. Poor woman. Butthole guy. haha. Good job.
LadyKay1818 1 year ago
Janette, you won me over with the GREAT title! Awesome work. :)
chriscommissomusic 1 year ago
there are so many talented people, but you have a big talent ;))
Alexandria369g 1 year ago
great song! wow! im hooked on you!
mybeachishott 2 years ago
It is good.
It is a good tune.
chapmanyasuki1 2 years ago
great job love it
TheTedrogers 2 years ago
FABULOUS!!! Great voice, great song, great guitar playing!!!
guitargirljc90 2 years ago
Nicee, and Great song, You sing very well, and your hot!!..;)
puppyladd 2 years ago