Afro City episode 4 "Vegetarian New Year"

Ebony thought it was a dream when Jazzman got her tattoo, now she has to be a vegetarian for a month.

Category:

Entertainment

Tags:

• Afro City
• Rhonda Ray
• natural hair
• lobace
• vegetarian

[atruesoutherngal]

You ladies can DRESS!! So beautiful. 

[MichelCockerham]

please stop cursing!

[pumkinpie27]

Right now it's a little on the boring side. And incredibly cheesy! I watch because i want to support women trying to establish they're own thing. But those tips would help. There are tons of people on youtube and facebook that can write a script and make a decent show intro and soundtrack.

[pumkinpie27]

This show would be great if:

1. Better Script with juicier story lines

2. Better Camera. Its worth the investment

3. Too one dimensional. We don't have to see them together all the time.

4. Talk about daily real life issues facing black women. So people can relate

5. Soundtrack needs work. Get a real producer to get some beats, and better singer

[vaspers]

Good start. I see your heart here. You have some beautiful ebony ladies here. Keep at it. I wanted to post this on my client's blog but the cussing prevented me from doing so. Keep it funny and clean, office and family safe. :^)

[Skyy2121]

@ebonyrose316266 doesn't it.. Cyrstal's hair has to be a wig!! NO way.... lol I refuse to beleive other wise :-D.. well any as i was goin to comment.. I love love the outfits they rock!

[Thankyou3403]

I hope you receive this the way it is meant. I guess I could send it to you privately, but others could gain.

1. all the characters in this story are the same. Nothing different.

2. Script is horrible. Not dimensional enough

3. The narrator is better as a narrator than as an actress

4. The video quality is nice

5. You have potential in the show. But you have too many skinny women. Change up.

[ebonyrose316266]

@kitabare76

I agree and Crystal's hair looks like a wig too.

[Candygurl321]

wasnt Jazzman an extra in a club scene.I believe the movie was Thr Brothers.

[KTBEverlasting]

@MichelCockerham Then you might want to try and get on the writing staff of the show.

[KTBEverlasting]

LMAO @ the people complaining about the words. How did a word that Man created become so feared? We made them up, we put the meaning in them and we can take it out and change it.

Anyway, can't wait for the next episode.

[austinguy23]

Holy shit, what happened to your hair? You look like you should be dancing around a bonfire with a bone in your nose in a National Geographic documentary...