Rap Song Original

This is a rap song I wrote for my ex... This isn't my beat but I did use it... Not sure who the beat is by but it matched my song... Let me know what you guys think... Never listen to rap ever...

Song name: The End... Written by me... This song is very hard to listen to so i couldn't put up a video... Sorry...

Lyrics:

VERSE 1
Everybody dying and trying to stay alive.
Hypnotized by the words that remain inside.
You just keep trying but you just wanna quit.
Stand tall but you dont think your going to make it.
You start taking pills and soon you cant stop.
Till the next one where it makes you drop.
So you walk in the back but you hit the wall.
Head smacks the side and you start to fall.
You think its all good so you act all right.
But this is the day or should we say night.

CHORUS:
Trying to be cool .
Trying to be the best.
Trying act the tuffest.
When it comes to this.
Tryin to understand.
Its not a game.
Trying to be the one.
Thats not to blame.
(2 Times)

VERSE 2:
When you wake up and pick up your head.
You start to wonder can i be dead.
I take you in the back to ly you in bed.
I still remember the last thing that you said.
The last of your words hit my heart.
Like someone took a knife and split it apart.
But no matter what you said ill be by your side.
Head on my shoulder were in for a ride.

CHORUS:
Trying to be cool .
Trying to be the best.
Trying act the tuffest.
When it comes to this.
Tryin to understand.
Its not a game.
Trying to be the one.
Thats not to blame.
(3 times)
Yeah dont think this wont hurt.
Your in for a surprise.

VERSE 3:
Morning comes and the sun starts to shine.
Even though you feel fine.
A headache takes controls of your mind.
Looking around you cant find your love.
The one that you think the whole world of.
Walk in the kitchen and maybe hes there.
Maybe the bathroom but you better prepare.
What started as a good day turns for the worst.
At first you scream but it just makes you cry.
Hanging in the bathroom helpless wheres your pride.
You made him do this thats why he hung to die.
Say goodnight and Goodbye.

CHORUS:
Trying to be cool .
Trying to be the best.
Trying act the tuffest.
When it comes to this.
Tryin to understand.
Its not a game.
Trying to be the one.
Thats not to blame.
(2 Times)
Not to blame

ENDING
Its not what others do that can hurt the one you love.
Its what you say that can turn everything around.
Even though you may not remember.
Its not like it never happend.

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[metsch8]

how long did it take u to write?

[slowmofo357]

@metsch8

Uhm to be honest around 1 and a half hours if that. The other one I did was within 1 hour. I know it could be better I just wanted to write some rap that day. Thinking about writing another one here shortly.

[monster00freak]

hot rap dude

[slowmofo357]

Thanks bro.

[freestylebam053]

best song ever -- member i kept playing it over and over.. now i still do.. lol

from one of your ex's

[slowmofo357]

Who is this?

[salsucks101]

wow piano rap never hurd of it... but cool lol

[BloodSaintsz]

i thought this was gonna be shit like all the ohers but its cool nice work

[Urpchelpman]

yeah sometimes im too strong up straight all nightlong sometimes my rap is weak but yo shit is antique i dont need any technique to make you shriek in terror you say u real gangster you too eager lead yo way to failure did i stutter i dont think so im the hero of the ghetto dont mess with me my pants baggy you can just barely listen to my rap its a deathtrap and yos is a little mousetrap

New Money

[Arzi5]

This is awesome, what program you used and what did you use to record your voice?

[DutchyVegas420]

its aiight man, yer better than me atleast XD

[LuanP44]

hey!very cool!!i loved it!

im writing my rap song too,im only 14,and my voice isnt so good,its very hard,im using piano too,but it will never become as good as yours!!!

very good job man!!

[GlitchFinderInAtHome]

Awesome

[ramonjr28]

yo i wrote a remix to this

[aftertouchbeatz]

good stuff man, if you're looking for beats check out

AfterTouchBeatz*com, all the beats are free!

[MrOxygenabsorber]

nice thnx

[MyBonee]

lol this shit is a joke