Hey guys this is a trailer for my LWD fanfiction Evidently Clear. It's a bit choppy, but the best I could pull together to fit the story... which if you are a fan of LWD and you haven't checked out yet, TOTALLY should! The link is http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4756785/1/Evidently_Clear
This is a future fic that takes place about ten years after the end of the show. Derek has moved to Miami and become very sucessful. When he is about to make the biggest deal of his life, he comes across someone with a familiar face and quickly learns that he may be making his biggest mistake. It becomes clear that not everything is as it seems, and has to put his fate in the hands of the last person he'd ever expect!
Pretty good trailer. I'm gonna go check out the story now. Just one thing. When you're listing all the things Derek has the periods just kinda throw it off. A period marks the end of a sentence and I feel that all the things you're listing Derek has should flow together and the periods don't let them do that.
kalinabelle 2 years ago