AB005 Carrefour China - Kiew Ee Fun, Edwin (EKEF) -- Nanyang Business School, NTU
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All Comments (49)
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Overall: Satisfactory piece with clear message. Focused on what to do, neglecting how and why. Extent to which 1. Content meets requirements? Somewhat incomplete.
2. original & creative Analyses? Lists actions & impacts
3. uses Time well? Short, sweet, largely to the point.
4. logical & actionable? good decision criteria. Nice effort to justify from financial perspective.
5. uses Multimedia? Nice yet unobtrusive animation. Clear narrative complements images
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Bro this is so mint i had to watch it in 720HD!
No kidding, wow wow wow. Very informative and relevant, fab usage of 'non-tacky' animation that held my attention throughout every second of it. Stuck through most of the 'theory' bits because of clear, comprehensive explanation, coupled with bright colours and stupendous animation techniques. Great job. Interesting ideas. Great voice too.
And no, Edwin did not post this comment. lol. Keep it up bro, u've got a gift. God bless!
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wow, great stuff there! very interesting to watch! keep it up!
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Wow that was very educational, an interesting corporate presentation.
I find it fresh that NTU business provided this opportunity for their students, and I watched a few other videos to compare. Yours is definitely the most informative.
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i really enjoyed this! it is really very nicely done. did you use flash to do the animations?
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wow edwin this video is amazing! very very professional indeed! :D
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Absolutely great! Good use of the mixture of pop art and real people, coupled with matching music for the theme. The pace and analysis was well developed which makes the grasping of ideas and concepts a breeze. well done!
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WOAH! It's really great! Catchy intro, cool graphics etc... and YOU DID THIS ON YOUR OWN? WOW. haha
Did u film some of the scenes urself??
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Very well researched. Visuals are easy to follow and effectively reinforce the main points. Charts and video footages are well interlaced, which adds great dynamism to the presentation. Can consider selling it to Carrefour!
thks guy for the suggestions and comments! finally another project i really took lotsa pride in...and yes i went down to carrefour singapore to film some shots!
edwinkiew 1 year ago
weixiang, thanks for the comments. the confusion with the pronounciation went like this. i did an earlier recording rendered as "car-foo", subsequently checked BBC news n the reporter read it as "car-four" instead. i think i didnt change e first segment, sry for the confusion.
agree with u on the swallowing of words, haha had a hard time reading e long lines...there was one part i had to NG 10 odd times. first try at this video-making thing, good hands-on nonetheless
edwinkiew 1 year ago
Thanks guys, as much as getting this video up was a pain in the ass, i kinda enjoyed doing it =) pls tell me my one week of blood n sweat was worth it...haha!
edwinkiew 1 year ago