Rhyme of Self Crime - Uŋкŋσﺲŋ

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Lyrics
Ok so we know my songs have been personal before
But I'm going to listen to this beat and just write a little more
The last years of my life has been closed door after closed door
Convince myself that it was all because of that fucking whore
I went from good to bad, from bad to worse
From worse to bottom, and I called it a curse
For real though all I had were these words
And I figured every little letter was better here than turned to verbs
You know, I used to be a good guy
I used to do the right things, I had a good eye
Then I died ever so slowly, I felt my dark side growing
My soul started showing
My skin started to rot, Without the knowing
Sewing seeds of bad return no path glowing
What the fuck, who turned off all the lights
With these drugs and this pen, I concede to the fight

Who am I...What is this...
Where am I at...Did the point I miss
What are these thoughts, what's the design
The feeling here can't be store bought, It's the rhyme of self crime
Who am I...What is this
Where am I at...Did my turn I miss
What are these feelings, what's my purpose
My brain is reeling, Might as well let it all surface

Looking back before my motives shifted heavily
I remember waking every morning to her face like Reveille
Then steadily I don't what the fuck
Ahead of me will be said to be a long string of bad luck
I don't really blame her no more, I move my own steps
I don't call her names anymore, just a regret
It ain't the same anymore, wanna know my secret?
I don't think anything else in this world meant what she meant
But now, my mind is on different things
Sellin green, and refusing to give up on my dreams
What are they, what would they be?
Blaze this mic and stages rattle ya faces with lyrical structure and a dope beat
I don't know though, maybe it's all for show
Cause I'm not sure how far this hole goes
But I guess there's only one way find out
Chase the rabbit into wonderland move forward till my times out

Who am I...What is this...
Where am I at...Did the point I miss
What are these thoughts, what's the design
The feeling here can't be store bought, It's the rhyme of self crime
Who am I...What is this
Where am I at...Did my turn I miss
What are these feelings, what's my purpose
My brain is reeling, Might as well let it all surface

In the end my only regret is giving everything up
Letting my brain take over, letting my heart give up
Knowing that I could never live up
To the image I created before I put my fists up
I never thought shit would turn out this way
I never thought my only motive would be pay
I never thought I'd burn weed everyday
I never though I'd be so emotively grey
It's ok though, because I'm really not myself anymore
I finally stood at one of those closed doors and knocked
Low and behold, someone answered and said come in
I had a strange feeling that this was a new beginning
I sat down, and faced the back of a shadow
Nervous, heart racing was it even a man I don't know
But for some weird reason I felt at home
How strange it was a side of me...Unknown.

Who am I...What is this...
Where am I at...Did the point I miss
What are these thoughts, what's the design
The feeling here can't be store bought, It's the rhyme of self crime
Who am I...What is this
Where am I at...Did my turn I miss
What are these feelings, what's my purpose
My brain is reeling, Might as well let it all surface

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• unsigned
• unknown
• rap
• rapper
• crime
• self
• suicide
• give
• up
• sure
• unsure
• rhyme
• design
• feeling
• depression
• confusion
• lies
• whore
• lost
• surface
• motive
• shift

[FattyBowlzforDayz]

Clean ass shit dude love your style keep it up

[UnknownCrypt]

@FattyBowlzforDayz That's what's up man. I am glad you enjoy it.

[livetohipandhop]

Wow.. that shit was dope man... wicked lyrics... great hook.. very well packaged... 5 Stizzles.. Favoritizzled... my fizzle wizzle rizzle!!! :)

[UnknownCrypt]

lol. Dopizzle. Thanks a lot man. This song came together pretty easily after the first two bars. I'm glad you think it all fit well.

[mcSkeptik]

Awesome man. I feel it for real.

[UnknownCrypt]

Well I did 5 years in NC and 4 in FL. So the south definitely has a huge influence on me in all ways.

[UnknownCrypt]

Thanks for sure man. I try not to sound the same over and over, my style can be ridiculously different if I feel a certain way. Probably be my downfall one day.  But if you want to work on your shit stay persistent, and beats you identify with.

[moonsoonmenu]

pshhhhhhhhhhh lol aite whatever then

[UnknownCrypt]

I got defensive because it wasn't advice posted it was "you don't rhyme, and what you do rhyme is s00pr simple" Especially when you post lines that aren't even part of the same scheme. They belong to the lines above and below. If you're going to give advice make it constructive sounding and accurate. If you don't want your 'advice' responded to...don't post it?

[moonsoonmenu]

you don't gotta get all defensive man I was just putting in my 2 cents, if ya don't like the advice then don't take it, maybe I am stuck in cookie cutter rhyme schemes, but that's just me.