the Girl Next Door - Jimmy Fisher (original)

This is a song i recently wrote. It is still in the working phase, but i thought i would put it out there.

The title explains the song.

Comment as you wish.

Category:

Music

Tags:

• Jimmy
• Fisher
• John
• Mayer
• Ana
• Free
• Jack
• Johnson
• Jason
• Mraz
• Terra
• Naomi
• Jake
• Coco
• Acoustic
• Alternative

[HideHollow]

The melody is amazing, but I think you have to work on your voice and then your song will be perfect :)

But anyway you made a song which will rest in my ear for the next few hours !

Greetings

and keep it up working !

[inikoni]

Thanks for the input. I wrote it about 2 weeks ago and still working on perfecting it.

[PeterbutterNJelly]

if you tighten up the tempo and vocals this song is ready to go....great job!!!

[inikoni]

will do.

[BeautifulGirlByDana]

Its a good original song ,thanks for sharing,i like the lyrics and your singing is fine,best wishes.

[HideHollow]

Wow I wrote my last comment 9 months ago but I still love your song, it's so beautiful :)

did you improve it somehow ? I would definately love it.

[ericcartmill]

Im wondering why you have Ana Free as a tag in this song haha - -

pretty good sing song ya got there - - i'll rate it about... 4stars.

rock on man.

[j0e14]

awesome

[Mattlaijunloong]

awesome stuff. :)

we all have the girl next door. sadly mine moved out a few weeks back. God i miss her.

[glorienmanifesto]

Its you, so it is great