Long Distance Relationship (Project Direct 2009 Submission)

Written, Produced, and Directed by Jason (crimsong19)

Starring Alex (steakandalex) and Brandon.

Contains: beef jerky, a hamburger, and a red phone.

Category:

Comedy

Tags:

• Project
• Direct
• short
• film
• three
• props
• Alex
• steakandalex
• Brandon
• Long
• Distance
• Relationship

[DRW90]

hope you don't get in trouble for the song in the background.

Good tracking shots, and decent acting.

Best of luck my friend, and check my video out if you can.

[crimsong19]

Hope so. Thanks! You too.

[theclassicweirdo]

I found it hard to get to the end, this film didn't really hold my attention.

[crimsong19]

Okay. I'll keep that in mind for future shorts. Thanks for watching!

[pfranks44]

I really am sorry I sound like such a dick.

ok well the film was just not compelling at all. the story was lacking pretty bad and the camerawork and audio were pretty bad as well. if i were u, i would invest in a tripod and some audio equipment if you plan on continuing making movies.

watch my entry when i upload it. you have every right to shoot it down the same way

[crimsong19]

Yeah. That's what we've been doing when filming a sketch comedy show I'm working on on campus, either steady handheld shots or stationary shots.

[CellarDoorFilm]

If you plan on making videos for youtube, it'd be pointless to invest in a HD cam or anything, because the quality hit wen uploading to youtube would make it no more or less better then the camera you have. As far as tripods go, be inventive lol. Wen working on my project we used a ladder with its different steps, and then used books on those steps to fine tune the height :P. Ladderpod I call it. Just work with what you got right?

[crimsong19]

Okay. Thank you for the tips. Perhaps I should put a Panasonic video camera on my holiday gift list.

[crimsong19]

Thank you very much.

[Room149]

Aside from that, it was a non-conventional story (no real hook, no real climax, no resolution and very dialogue heavey). Keep in mind, this is a visual medium, (if you were to go the dialogue route then again, a quieter setting) and with a visual medium audiences tend to enjoy the conventional hook, rising action, climax and resolution. just my 2 cents. 5 stars anywas thought cuz it def doesnt deserve 1 lol