My first ever stop motion animation, please comment.wmv

Ive never created one before and i wanted to give it a go. I filmed it using my phone, so its never going to be good quality. But please be nice as im new to this. Im going to try and get better and i'm gonna keep posting new videos lol. Please subscribe so you can follow my rise lol :)
Btw the video is really random, if you wanted to know what i had in mind just ask
Thanks

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[04bello]

@SuperMovieGuy13 Soon i Shall be releasing my mini series titled legendary, we have gotten a lot better and are planning to release episode 1 the revolutionary at the end of this week, please spread the word!!

[04bello]

@TheBlueBanshee Thanks i didnt know about the camera having to be still lol cheers :) i also subscribed

[TheBlueBanshee]

Looks good mate :) To improve you should try holding the camera still in one place, that way all the images are taken from the same angle. Also if you use more frames per second it will look smoother. I subscribed :)

[04bello]

please go on my channel so you can see if im improving, subscribe too as im sure im gonna improve a lot, and you can see all my new videos

[04bello]

@SuperMovieGuy13 I watched yours and i see what you mean :) its really good. How do i get mine smoother?

[SuperMovieGuy13]

Work on the smoothness. Check out mine.